Excellent conclusion to a 'simple' but thought provoking story. I liked the lesson that Joan grasped, and Adam grew to understand--a part of the maturing process for him as one of God's servants. This took me back to the days of the series when Joan was going thru a similar process. Well done.
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When you say the end do your mean the End of your Joaniverse series. Your last sentence about god riding back to heaven seems like that is the end on Joan and Co's mission. If it is then an epilogue would be nice...I'm just sayin.. you know..Other then that I love your stories.

Perhaps it would be best if Mr. Terrant paid the legal bills since his daughter was responsible for spooking the horse, and he is responsible for the actions of his minor offspring. Looking forward to where this is going.
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I loved the cat fight between Elizabeth and Joan (all it needed was alittle hair-pulling to make it hilarious). Looking forward to more.
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Just as I was weighing the two sides of the arguement you presented, you threw in that surprising twist at the end. I have no idea where this is going, but I'm hooked. Looking forward to more.
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A good continuing of the story, and I look forward to more. I wonder why Agnes hasn't recruited others to join in her protest, unless she is too much of a drama queen to share the spotlight (and maybe the public exposure is as important to her as the actual cause).
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Great start. Agnes is certainly the confident sort, not only in politics, but also about her body. I look forward to the why of God's assignment, and I can see that stopping Agnes could be a formidible task. (And I agree with Adam, with jobs so scarce, it would be hard to justify stopping a new factory. Of course a lot of environmentalists are too fanatical in their beliefs to care.)
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