Oh, gosh... You're making me cry! T.T XD

Gosh, I've never seen someone kill Ash (or Pikachu) in such a blatant, yet loving way, and I love it. ^U^

Goodness, what a way to die, though! *shudders* Wow... Poor Pikachu and Ash... T.T

The funeral was beautiful (go, Team Rocket), and for some reason, I loved the parts where it mentioned how many people Ash had touched over the years as a Trainer, and honestly, the 'roar for revenge' was very telling, too! ^U^

Rock on!! Gosh, the ending was amazing! Such a heartbreaking, yet true point, that 'Pikachu loved Ash enough to follow him into certain death'! T.T T.T
Ever-so sincerely signed,
Shizuku Tsukishima749 :D ;D :) ;)

wow, i am CRYING. This is so sad! I loved Charizard, Squirtle and Pidgeot being there! I LOVED Pikachu going in after Ash. It really showed the absolute depth in their friendship for him to do that.

About the only thing that would have made this more complete was Mewtwo showing up, He seemed to be the Legendary that was closest to Ash.

That was so sad, and so *sweet*. I love how you described Ash's impact on those he had met on his journey--Pokemon and Human alike--but I most especially like the way you described the bond between Ash and Pikachu.

Well done!

Best Regards,
Sentimental Star

... That was terribly depressing. Touching, and really puts into perspective the beautiful friendship between Ash and Pikachu, but horribly depressing all the same.

I...wow. I'm almost in tears right now. That was beautifully written, but also extremely sad, and I think that you brought out this story in a very good way. I really can't think of much more to say about that, other than excellent job...I doubt I'll be forgetting this story in a hurry.

very sad, i actually cried. it was a really nice touch getting some of his original pokemon to turn up, same with team rocket

Aw man! You made me cry! I loved this. Thank you so much for posting it.

Oh dear God, I haven't even seen the show in years, and I'm tearing up. That's how you know it's good. Bravo.

only thing that would have made this more touching was if some legendary pokemon showed up. at least Mewtwo and Lugia

Just wanted to say that this was one of the best stories I have read in quite a while. Simple, well thought out, well written and well done.

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character death!
and pikachus death!
no!

Extremely touching

I don't really know what to say, but I just had to review. Unsurprisingly, it made me cry...my god, that was just so moving, even if you were telling. Those last lines were amazing...and the whole thing, it was basically exactly what one would expect in such an event,yet you were able to write it in such an emotional way, even in this style. A wonderful read.

Oh wow. *sniff* That was simply amazing. The friendship of Ash and Pikachu were always one of my favourite things about the show. There isn't anything more pure and stronger than it. It was hard not to cry when the "number of seemingly wild pokemon" appeared and when even Team Rocket came to give their respects. I completely broke down when Brock commented how Pikachu wouldn't leave with Ash, willing to go with him to death. And I'm sure Ash would have done the same thing for his friend.

all I can say is wow. It still strikes me as amazing that some of the best fics I have ever read some how center around this show. Stories that just based off its premise should never be possible, yet they always hit me the hardest.

Brocks final words I think cause the best impact and the perfect closer not just on a level of friendship, but on the fact that even in the the nontraditial sense they were at the core soulmates that were incaple of existing with out the other. a tragic and way to young way to go yet fitting since Ash might never have been able to move on if Pikachu and passed on of old age while he was still in the prime of his life. Tragic and heartwelt ending to a unique love story.

And now that I have gone of on a strange and out there ramble I'll leave it at that. amazing piece Later