Oh dear god please stop the tears... *sob*

You have one hell of a brain in there, you know that? This website has it's bad sides, unfortunately, but then you come across something like this. Even to an outsider who has never heard of Pokemon, you can sense the feeling in the story. As for myself, growing up with these characters, this story is, in a strange way, beautiful. I can hardly describe the feeling.

Trying to drop the nostalgia and sadness (it's tough, alright? *sniff*), I really enjoy your writing. You have no idea who I am (my name is Purple Elephant, I bet that helps narrow it down from 7 billion people), but I can state with conviction that you are an excellent writer. And if you do go crazy sometimes, well, we all have our moments.

i don't know what to say,

... This was heartbreaking. You wrote it so well, I felt I was actually there. And the last line was perfect. It really showed the bond between Ash and Pikachu.

Thiat...was amazing. Almost made me cry, even.

That was beautiful. I was absorbed in your words from the very first sentence. You told the story... simply beautifully - I can't describe it in any way else. Definitely one of the most powerful and effective stories I've ever read - actual fiction novels, short stories, fanfiction, the like.

Thank you for writing such a marvelous, splendid, beautifully tragic piece :)

My God... I love this story. Truly, I do. Thank you for making it, because it is a masterpiece of unequaled rivalry.

Thank you.

OMG that was so! You deffo got to keep righting more stories like this! I cried :'(

So sad.

This is a very good story and very sad.

woo! Ash is finally dead!

holy crap! i dont know whats with me, but i'm really teary-eye today! this was the second time i cried while reading a fic where one or both of them die!

OH... you made me cry i had to stop reading and find some tissues.

Oh damn you! You've made me cry! I actually had to take ten minutes away from the labtop to find tissues and stop sobbing before I could write this review!

Ash! ASH! You KILLED Ash! And not only Ash but PIKACHU! I'd hate you if your story wasn't so beautiful! Ash...

This is worse than the first Pokémon movie! At least then pokeémon tears brough him back... now he's just... dead. With a teeny, tiny Pikachu sized coffin next to him...

x

Amazing. So sad. I loved it.

It made me cry.