wow i read this story in its entirety ...and i must say it was one of the best i have ever read...cant wait to read the sequel, great job!

I really like this it is unlike any of the RileyOC stories I've ever read. I really like Mia. I have a character named Amelia Earhart Gates but she's Ben's cousin. You write very well.

awe thats so sweet!

Raine

Great story!! Can't wait to read more! :)

oh very humorous! i really liked this fluffy chapter! can't wait til abigail and ben find out..

lolz, sounds like they're having fun!

Raine

Great Pace.

Riley enters the hospital room... (and shivers, as all things hopsital, blood make him queezy)

Mia begins to thank Riley, her voice weak from surgery
Mia motions for Riley to come closer to her bedside

(Riley quickly glances at IV/morphine drip and shivers a second time)

as Riley leans in closer to hear Mia... Mia lifts her head... Riley is hopeful for a kiss...

when Mia reaches into Riley's inside jacket pocket to retrieve
?

Suggestion... a folded book page...
a page from the President's Book (this would bridge/link as serve as the catalyst for Riley to write his book ((Nat Treasure 2)) and for the reason Riley says, "go back..." when Ben is flipping through the President's Book... as Riley notices pages 45-46 missing

wishing you continued success, Georgie

Yummy! Question for when your done with the next chappie (or few chappies): will you be doing the second movie too? And if so will it be in this fic or a different one?

FINALLY! Mia and Riley are together! YAY!
the whole part in the hospital and everything afterwards was super intense. but im glad it's over now. you should write some funny parts about them in cairo or even another exhibit opening at the smithsonian or somewhere. Great job, once again!!

happy writing :)

ya, but wouldnt he rather have Mia (the hot girl) take care of him rather than Ben (the 30-40 year old dude)?

Raine

you are evil! he better wake up! update soon!

Awesome chapter, but you so have to update asap, gotta know what happens next. ^_^

Wow! That was an unexpected turn! Poor Riley - at least you threw in the little bit of his POV so we know he'll turn out okay. Yeah for Riley being the hero!

how dare you! don't kill riley! update soon!

you scared me to death! thanks for not killing him. poor Riley! update soon!