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Satine89
2009-07-14 . chapter 1
Excellent little drabble on the inner thoughts of Dexter! You were right in the summary, it was extremely mild Dexdark, but it was well-written. I'm surprised I didn't stumble across this earlier, but I found it now. My only complaint is that a lot of your paragraphs start with "I", creating an illusion of stasis. Mix up your sentence structures a little!

I look forward to reading more from you.

Satine89
EmoKitten15
2009-06-16 . chapter 1
This is interesting. You should continue.
sabo09
2009-05-31 . chapter 1
I'm not big on the mm stories, but I enjoyed this. Very well written I must say!
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