 Satine89 2009-07-14 . chapter 1Excellent little drabble on the inner thoughts of Dexter! You were right in the summary, it was extremely mild Dexdark, but it was well-written. I'm surprised I didn't stumble across this earlier, but I found it now. My only complaint is that a lot of your paragraphs start with "I", creating an illusion of stasis. Mix up your sentence structures a little!
I look forward to reading more from you.
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