 darkwriter14 2009-12-11 . chapter 46Wow, this is getting intense! Love the cats! ;) And your conversations with Naru are the best! |
 Newbie23 2009-12-02 . chapter 46pls update! pls update!
i want to know what happen next...
also pls make the chapters a little longer...
hehe(nervous laugh) |
 EmeraldStar-goddess 2009-12-01 . chapter 46I still cant see his other eye..lol...like the chappie update soon! |
 Flamegirl5500 2009-12-01 . chapter 46So what is Naru's mother going to next I wonder. I guess I will have to wait and find out So Update when you can. great job so far. |
 miki230 2009-12-01 . chapter 46OMG Thi is too funny!! I love this! So the cat lady has paranormal abilites, that was too good! And the Dark night refrence was so funny! Keep up the good work and I can't wait for more! |
 darkwriter14 2009-11-29 . chapter 45Hahahaha! Cat lady! I've missed this story so much! Too bad that it will end soon. :( I'm looking forward to any future Ghost Hunt fics of yours, though! |
 LunaxXmoongoddessXx 2009-11-26 . chapter 45oh that is deep. Please update. Naru.. |
 Mouse Master 2009-11-19 . chapter 45 O.O LAST HOLIDAY?!?! <--is stunned.
Wow...now I'm sad. ToT <--is crying.
And his biological mother is a b*. Rhymes with witch. Hard to believe he shares her genes...
Whoa, hello...Never mind. Forget all that stuff I said about Akiko...Apparently it doesn't apply anymore...<--is reviewing as I read.
NAH! CLIFFHANGER! UPDATE PLEASE! T.T
Ahah...Lin's BLIND?! <--just fell off the chair again. I think you saw it once, in, like, the 9th manga where he was using his Shiki in the cave and the wind blew his hair back or something...And you can sometimes see an indication of it on the close ups or whatever...I think we can safely say that he has both eyes. Still, hilarious.
Yes, I love Lin too.
Q: who would win in a fight? Lin or Naru?
A: FANG! <--sorry, moment of maximum ride fangirliness...Seriously, who would win? Naru would beat Lin, but then he would faint or whatever (die?)... <--is confused. |
 Mouse Master 2009-11-19 . chapter 44 yeah...I decided I like reviewing and am doing it again...hope you don't mind...
"emotionally unstable!?" I got such a funny mental picture from the idea of Naru at a psychologist's that I fell out of my chair. Oi...did he do the whole chair and everything?
'Nother quick correction, if they're in japan, I think Akiko would have referred to Luella as "Davis-San" or, if she was being REALLY polite, "Davis-Sama." <--has taken Japanese as a 2nd language.
Lin's can be kind of a pushover, can't he? "Leverage." ha ha. I wonder what that was...
I don't think Naru would pick her over his parents. From all evidence in the manga, he really likes them.
Did you know that they actually don't even celebrate Thanksgiving in England, let alone Japan? Where exactly is Liz from? =]
Aha...your conversations with Naru sound a lot like the conversations with my friends (yes, sadly, a lot of my friends are actually a lot like Naru.)
You should bring in Fang from Maximum Ride someday. He's cool. If you desperately need something to read that's some good stuff right there. =]
FYI, I write really long reviews. I can't help it. I'm a novelist. |
 Mouse Master 2009-11-19 . chapter 43 Don't ask about the nickname, it's related to Fruits Basket.
But this was cool. I always wondered what his parents were like...his birth mom was right on...And I liked that Lin was in on it too...And his parents too...
Not to sound weird or anything, but I think his adoptive parents named him Oliver, not his birth ones. Just saying. It's a really cool twist that you made his dad english...
FYI, I've been reading this fanfiction almost since it started and liked it from the beginning. Unfortunately, my computer busted and that's why I hadn't read these chapters yet. I also have never reviewed before and thought it'd be cool to try. you might hear more from me later...who knows? Life is short.
Some fluffy put-ups for you, right there. Plus, I love how you write Naru. It's really just like him. I love it. <3
Wow...Naru fangirl moment...I need to get a life...heehee...
and the conversation at the end was hilarious too. It's just SO LIKE HIM! <3
Keep writing. You're really good. =] |
 Metamorcy 2009-11-17 . chapter 11Cute :D |
 EmeraldStar-goddess 2009-11-16 . chapter 45o...update soon! I can't wait to see what happens next^_^ |
 R.A.A 2009-11-15 . chapter 45 Gah another cliffhanger I wonder what Naru will do next. I'm so glad that your back to writing this story and Good luck on your exams. |
 BRUCE WAYNE 2009-11-15 . chapter 25 OMG! |
 BRUCE WAYNE 2009-11-15 . chapter 24 john sent it didn't he? |