I want to read it all over again, and again! kei is so loyal to hikari and you showed how truly kei realy loves hikari.

It's so sweet!

try making it longer but overall it was sweet and cool:

Did you get that off chain-mail?

cool how you made takishima's second answers better than his first answers!

its so sweet, everytime i read it -and i've been reading it over and over- my heart skips a beat. i hope you write more, and this is just simply brilliant

AW

that was so SWEET!'D

Great job:

AW! THAT WAS AMAZING GOOD JOB. very well done. keep it up. can't wait to see ur future work :D