this is so interesting i don't know what to think! please update as soon as you are able. thanks!

so sad hope he can find happiness in other 'demons'

Very nice. I really like your writing style. Like someone else reviewed, it's like poetry. It really leaves me wondering what'll happen next, just for the way you describe everything.

I wonder how this will turn out, since you haven't actually seen InuYasha.

Well, good luck with writing. I'll be waiting for the next chapter ;)

~ML~

They live. *gushes*

You should totally read Trigun. The whole planet is one big desert.

'they spread like weed' makes me think that 'you should pull out the weed before it spreads too far' but... you don't exactly stop weed like that from spreading, do you? ah, poor humans.

I think Naruto is the creepiest thing on that desert. xD I mean, I'd prefer snakes over something that looms in the distance, looks at you for awhile and then walks away slowly all creepy like. Eh, I'm just imagining again.

You wrote it prettily again, though I doupt you know how to write something unpretty. Ah, but when you described the people slowly dying it sent delicious chills down my back.

Mm, Naruto must be hot to the touch.

Aww, the beginning is so pretty. He seems kinda indifferent that his city is gone though. well that's the impression that I got. xD; he cared about Inari and Kono a lot, so cute!

Oh the poor, pretty ancient creature. ;u; <3

(me wants rolly-polly! D<)

this stroy makes me feel really depressed in a good way and i cant wait for a new chappy

While your story may be humble and your title slightly misgiving. You write with such a style that it is quite hard to stop reading. I hope later on though you begin to add more depth to the story. Thank you for the story I hope to see more soon.

sounds more like poetry, still i cant wait for the next chapter

Ah...interesting. I like the different scenes.

I was wondering when a inuyasha character was going to show. Still incredible. I sort of feel like an addict. Something about this story makes me excited to read it. It was the first chapter that created the mystery for me.

Still, this fanfic keeps me interested. Can't wait for chapters once I finish one.

Something about this story keeps me interested. Good job.

seemed very poetic then anything
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inuyasha!?!? 0_o i saw "dune" an was thinking "frank herberts: dune"..well ya learn something new everyday i suppose