Love the story! Any chance of an update soon?

I hate cliff hangers. :p Any hope of an update soon?

Oh gosh things are getting complicated now. Houlihan is giving me the creeps in this fic. I'm guessing her family have no idea what is going on in this marriage, all the suffering she is having to go through. It'll be even worse if she now has feelings for Carrion, especially since to him she still seems to be second best.
Looking forward to the next update!

Oh this is so sad. I can't wait to read mroe though!

I'm almost afraid to go on to the next chapter. This will either go really well or really badly.

A lovely story. It is a little confusing who you kept switching between first and third person, but other than that, it's great. :)

This is such a dark, dark story. I love it! I really dont have anything helpful to say, only that I hope you continue updating, because it's awesome!

Interesting. Short and sweet. (Did I say that for a different one too? Hmm...)

Very good. They seem to get along well as a couple, and the drinking scene was well-written. I'm not sure if you're writing Carrion quite the right way, but this version is just as good as Barker's. Um... Houlihan is an honestly disturbing character. Drinking blood isn't so bad, but the part about his thoughts on Izis, and his reaction to the deaths was freaky. :) It's all coming along nicely; please update again soon.

(Sorry if this is a little incomprehensible, I'm almost asleep. ;)

I am emotionally exhausted after reading this, think I need a time out. Can't wait for what you have planned next!!

I actually felt a little sick reading that, and mean through sympathy with your character. I still do think you explain things very well, and although I'm repeating myself, you do have a knack of being blunt without being vulgar about it. That is probably why I totally believe your character, the situation you've placed her in. I'm even nervous about clicking the next chapter button, omg.

Wow. Not exactly what I had expected, but... what the word... good? nonetheless. I appreciate that you made the most of the scene without going beyond what's appropriate for a T rating. 5 stars from me. And thanks for updating so soon. :)

Eep! That's got to be scary. I almost don't want to go on! Who am I kidding, of course I will. It's too good to miss. :p Very good story line so far, I like Izis's (Izis'?) attitude. On to the 4th chapter; I hope it's as good as this one. :)

i havent read abarat story in long time! keep it up she is not a mary sue in my eyes lol she actually would fit in with my friends

Very good. I'm scared for Izis, but very good. Please continue. :)