This snapshot idea would be amazing in a more
Yullen-ish fic!! In fact this snapshot thing is my favourite!!
I haven't ever seen this before. Its very unique.
If its not too much right now I ask that you use it again!
Its pretty darn cool. Lol
No really.. Its sort of like 5 different stories
Inside a story..or like 5 chapters in one.
Its easy to read too because then you don't
Have to wait for the author to go ahead and publish
More chapters because you have it allready.
And you can save the rest for later if you wish.

Okay okay bkah blah bla.
Me ranting about nothing basically. Lol
I could go on for hours. Anyway good fic!
Please do more yullen! :D

really extraordinary !! and so well-written.

Aw, how cute ^^ I'd love to choose a favorite from this chapter but I love them all ^^ From the entire thing, my favorites were "Not Quite a Fight," "Not Quite a Bad Day," and "Not Quite Sleepless Nights." Keep it up ^^

Great job. Loved how you wrote about how they were both dolls. Keep it up ^^
I am so spamming you right now XD

Aw, how sweet of Kanda XD Loved it. Keep it up ^^

XP This would be the most likely way either of them would get together in the actual show if either were gay ;P Nothing would get started without Lavi, huh XD Great job. Keep it up ^^

Great job ^^ Love your summary for this and I think the last line was great too. Keep it up ^^

I like this story. You're writing is very well done, and I will continue reading this series of oneshots.

OK. That was awesome. Just a question though, how come Yullen week only has SIX days, when an actual week has SEVEN? I mean, if it were up to me, Yullen week (and all those other weeks) would have TWENTY-EIGHT days. Like February. Then it'd be a month :)

I love it when you write something in this style~~ ahahah...

Walls and Gifts are definitely my favorite. Nyah, Wall is just so aw... angst and fluff are a good couple ne~~ XD

“Tell the guy I said ‘fuck off’,” Kanda finally responded.
I LOVE THAT SO MUCH! *rofl* It's so Kanda!! XD

Eh.. I've rambled about this chappie when u sleptover, so u knew what I'm gonna say ne? XD XD XD

Great job neesan~

Angst and subtle fluff make great combi nee~

I told you this one's my favorite, ne? The angst you threw in and the subtle fluff you slipped in--the proportion was so great it made a great dinner... XD *ditampar*

Anyway,oh Allen. And OH KANDA. Being in dilemma... I love it so much.*seneng liat Kanda disiksa kae gini..*

“Don’t talk as if you know me, brat!” he snapped, suddenly feeling exposed from the younger boy’s words for some reason he didn’t want to admit. “You know nothing, damn it… nothing."

That line of Kanda was heartbreaking. And you hinted about his insecurity of being exposed--Kanda's really an independent individual being he'd hate it when people saw his weakness--or even help him. You put so much into this line ne... that, and like how 'alone' Kanda really is. I heart this line~

Next?

Definitely one of my favorite~~ *sighs*

I love how you look at Kanda's game through Allen's eyes. IT's.. I dunno, like, I could feel Allen's anxiety of the possibility of Kanda's losing while at the same time I could also feel how determined Kanda was to win. IT's so AW. *dibantai*

The Innocence was kinda sad... I felt sad for Liu~ *hiks*

“Kanda, please win,” he finally muttered under his breath, but it seemed, due to the tense silence in the room, his voice had reached the older boy, because he then spared Allen a glance—and was it him seeing too far or was Kanda trying to reassure him?

Nyah... that subtle fluff melted me again~~!

DATE~~!

IT's a little bit OOC towards the end and I felt lik it's kinda being dragged on... but it's sweet and fluffy I melted~

*ish a puddle of water*

Ah~~ Kandanese. *grins*

I enjoyed their bickering so much! I laughed a lot--Kanda blushed, oh Kanda blushed!!*singing* And it's really nice to see them having actual conversations aside of the insult they threw ar each other. XD It's really nice~

*damn, ujan lagi. Inet tambah slow.. ngeri kesamber gludug...*

The thing I really like here is how straightforward and rough Kanda was in the KISS~ XD XD XD XD

Because it's so him. XD

It felt kinda rushed a little? But the IC-ness was realy love~ XD

And... oh Lavi. XD Lavi is so Lavi. Lavi. I love you. *pluk Lavi*

Nyah.. and you showed how much Allen and Kanda are so similar brilliantly through this one~~ I love it! And it's so funny how Kanda just jump into conclusion and kissed Allen senseless~ XD So much fun reading this~

Okay, go to your next review, neesan~~

“Your father is dead. You turned him into an Akuma and then killed him, sending his soul to where it belonged. So there’s no way the Mana in your dream could be your dead father, so stop depressing over whatever that fake Mana told you in your fucking dream.”

Oh, Kanda~ *sigh* Did i ever tell you I love this line? Because it's just so to-the-point and very, very Kanda-ish~! XD

And.. nyan, somewhat I fell in love with your Link here.. XD I don't know, but when Kanda and Allen bickered, Link sounds like a mother snapping at her children for fighting. XD

You made Allen's dream pretty vivid--Allen's part on angst was awesome! And of course, the last fluff you slipped in was aw~ XD