Hey I like Light. And I realy like LightxL.

Wow, you REALLY need a beta.
Your grammar absolutely SUCKS ǻss.
And even with good grammar, this would be still be shítty because, frankly, each mini-story was bland and written poorly.

You also don't need SEVEN AN's in this; it's repetitive and obnoxious.

Overall, this was completely awful.

~heitone

K FIRST U WROTE THEM ALL IN THE MIDDLE OF THE NIGHT IM SURPRISED UR BRAIN WAS FUNCTIONING...SECONDLY THEY WERENT COMPLETELY INSANE LIKE YOU WHICH MEAN U PUT THOUGHT INTO THEM...THIRDLY THEY WERE SHORT...BUT GOOD CONSIDERING U ONLY HAD LIKE 2 MINUTES FOR EACH ONE...AND THEY GOT LONGER...SINCE I WANTED MORE FROM THE STORIES THEY WERENT BORING...BUT U SHOULD WRITE A REAL FANFIC AND POST IT...AND STOP BEING SOO MODEST IF U CAN WRITE THOSE WITH NOT MUCH THOUGHT U MUST BE GOOD...

I USE THEM TO BURN TOO! YES!! BURN FOR KILLING MY L! ... sorry, this is supposed to be a review. I like this, I might just have to go do it... right now. I think I will, thanks for the idea, story is faved! Cuz Mello is sexy!

CRAP..I MENT TO SAY 5 SONGS...