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Reviews for: A Window to the Soul
Hic Iacet Mori
2009-12-18 . chapter 1
I love this so damned much. I can see Naruto now, preparing his party for his two invited guests. I know he's happy.

Happy Christmas.
Chibi Carru
2009-12-07 . chapter 1
If only there was a sequel that was happy, that would be so great! I thoroughly enjoyed the story of Naruto and his imaginary Christmas friends, and compassionate Sasuke wanting to take Naruto's sorrow away... It was way too cute XD. I don't like cliffys or things that there is a maybe or maybe not will happen next... XD I want some...SMUT! Hahhaa. That would be one hell of a Christmas present for Naru I think very much! XD
hamiechi
2009-10-17 . chapter 1
I hid at comp lab when my christian friend invited me to her christmas party -scratchs head-
Yeah, I notice he have no gift, but who would buy gift for her/himself?
Btw, I laughed aloud seeing your polling. Ahakahak...
Do you still accept betaing? I really need beta here...
flimsysky
2009-09-05 . chapter 1
For a one-shot, this was so bittersweet and delivered a punch straight to the gut. Not gonna lie- tears were rolling down my face by the end of the story. Great storytelling :) Looking forward to more of your other works (hopefully in English? ^^;)
val1207wong
2009-08-10 . chapter 1
Its so sad! The part where Naruto is still smiling and handling out his presents really broke my heart. At least he is happier in the end right?
Oh, and Naruto not buying a present for himself makes me think that he is very selfless, putting others before himself. It kind of endearing.
I find the ending perfect, even though I would like to see a happier ending with Naruto, Sasuke and Itachi at the christmas party.
I just love this amazing story(:
unique94chick
2009-08-06 . chapter 1
oohh !! updates ??
:3
ComaWhite.X
2009-07-21 . chapter 1
This brought a tear to my eye.
Wonderful, beautiful and excrutiatingly painful.

x
Ari-souls
2009-06-20 . chapter 1
That was beautiful.
nareboshi
2009-06-07 . chapter 1
So...sad. I also find it interesting how Naruto didn't get himself a present. Prehaps he thought that just anyone turning up would be a present enough ^^

I am really hoping right now that there's going to a sequel to this... maybe next christmas or something. I know that the ending is not exactly all angsty and sad, but I still find it sad how nothing really changed. But if a sequel or next chapter isn't possible, I guess I can live with this ending.

Sweet story again^^ and I look forward to the next chap for Lima
Danny Anime Girl
2009-06-01 . chapter 1
V.V I've always feard that kind of rejection... your story was so sad... It realy touched me truly... how can people be so cuel? I swear It's verry good you just made it to my favies list and for me its hard to get anyone on there because nothing seems good enough but man this is way good I loved it and I almost cryed v.v so sad Please some more do like next years party or something anything to lighten my now heavy heart thank you
Ann
2009-06-01 . chapter 1
U made me cry. It's a terrible yet amazing, touching story. I have to read more of urs works. maybe u could write a continuos?
fishbird
2009-06-01 . chapter 1
I have no critisism, this story was good. I'm faving it by the way.
Hic Iacet Mori
2009-06-01 . chapter 1
This is such a beautiful piece. It wraps you in its arms, seizes your throat, brings tears to your eyes, and leaves you floating and drowning with sad happiness. It's so poignant and very, very wonderful. I love it so much.

I feel so happy for Naruto, it hurts.

Thank you for allowing us the privilege to read this beautiful, beautiful work of art. You have no idea how much reading this made me feel. Thank you.
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