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Reviews for: Look To The Skies
RionaEire
2009-06-01 . chapter 1
Nicely done introspections from and about Inara, logical and well depicted. I find it odd that this training house is called Madressa and Inara's own house was called Madrasa, oh well, no matter. I liked your comparison of the wall around the training house and wall Inara sets up around her emotions, it made good sense.
Riona
writtenwordlover
2009-06-01 . chapter 1
Nicely developed, I especially like this line;

She'd given him an out, told him that she was leaving and he could have his space now.

It's plausible, that's exactly what she thought she was doing.
Bytemite
2009-06-01 . chapter 1
Very longing tone, consistent throughout. :)

Conflict between the logic and the emotion indeed. The emotion side seems to be winning, doesn't it?
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