AWW!
I love Papa!Hoho!
Such a sweet story; it made me get a weepy :'(

Oh... my god...

I cannot believe this is the third time I read this story and I haven't reviewed yet!

I think you wrote this very well. It's absolutely weird that you can just picture this happening in the manga or anime and just know that there IS a fluffy Father-And-Son relationship out there for Hohenheim and Edward! OwO


Now, if you will excuese me, I will read this again and cry my eyes out.

Dang. ::sniffle:: How did I miss this one back when I reviewed another of yours with Hohenheim and Ed? Because I almost always enjoy Hohenheim and Ed interaction (even when they're being more dysfunctional than anything else) and knowing your other fanfic was good... Well, at any rate, this is just as good as the older piece, if not more so. And, the end again made me smile.

You need more reviews for this. Very well done. You do such great work. I love reading everything you write.

Oh, dear, I'm spamming you with a review...
You've done it again! Why is it I have such trouble trying to criticize your work? I'm a very critical reviewer, but it's so hard to find fault with your fics...It's no fair...you're too good at what you do.
You've really captured the more human side of Hohenheim, with this one. Kudos!

I almost started crying!
That was so touching and beautiful!
Great work!

Aww!! My heart just absolutely melted at the Parental!Hohenheim fluff. This story was absolutely beautiful and the emotions were captured flawlessly. And I agree with other reviewers; Hohenheim is a seriously over-looked character, and he's really an intersting guy. Too bad Edo hates him. TT_TT I always would've liked for them to make up in the anime or movie.

Oh my God. That was amazing. Your descriptions were beautiful and the entire story line was moving and thought provoking and just...perfect. I haven't read something this well written in a while. The pain Hohenheim was feeling came across perfectly and then at the end that pride he felt just seeped into me as well. Its been a long time since a fanfiction could move me like this. It was beautifully written, you did an amazing job.

ForeverFalling.

My cat and I loved the fic, it was so sweet! At first, I didn't understand what age Edward was or why Hoenheim was holding Edward (because he's long gone when Ed and Al tried to bring back Trisha), but it all made sense at the end. Good work!

ah, my good friend. i'm so glad that you're back! i haven't forgotten about you at all, so you know =j (i've missed you, actually XD)

hohenheim is an interesting guy, untill the latest manga chapers, i haven't really thought anything about him. i mean, i knew that ed hated him, but i never really picked up on it. he's really a good guy, though, i think haha

they never really talk about ed's recovery in either, so this is a really nice interpretation! so cute too, how hohenheim would ignore his pain to hold ed... i just think that's so adorable.. i've really enjoyed this story! i hope you stay not dead =D

Absolutely fantastic! I don't think Hoenheim really gets enough credit or attention really in most fanfics. Thanks for writing this!

I love this! Its a cute Hohenheim Ed fluff!