 Mireilles3 1/4/06 . chapter 1An interesting scene between those two. I wish there were more to it, though.
keep up the good job!
Love
Mireille X |
 Alley Parker 8/14/05 . chapter 1Aww that's sad...
Really good fic! |
 Theed3263827 4/11/00 . chapter 1 Ohhh! Goosebumps. Very well written! A sequel please! I can't live without one! |
 Jedi Cool 4/11/00 . chapter 1 This is an excellent vignette, Superninja. I really like the argument. You could do this from different angles, as well. |
 beth 4/11/00 . chapter 1 Very good, very there a sequel?(hint hint). |
 urnofknowledge 4/11/00 . chapter 1 Chilling. I commend you. The master-padawan relationship between Anakin and Obi Wan is an inherently emotional one, and you captured some of those emotions very well. |
 padawanjinx 4/11/00 . chapter 1 I liked this story, the only thing is that it was too short...great work though...keep it up...PJ |
 Master Saraya Jinn 4/11/00 . chapter 1 SECREAMING FOR MORE SEQUELS! GREAT JOB! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! LOOK FORWARD FOR ANOTHER INSTALLMENT!(10) |