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MASC
2009-10-28 . chapter 20
I always knew Sporty was strong but damn! And I now have a mental image of Big Blue carrying The Rotten One around town like a maniacal cartoon character! Win. Total epic win. :-D So what's in store for our heroes next?
MASC
2009-10-17 . chapter 19
LMAO! I think it's funny that nobody can get over the fact that Susan and Robbie did the Wild Thing!

I guess my suspicions weren't right, after all. Oh poo. Leave it to me to assume the worst in almost every character.

And now it looks like the action's coming in full swing! And I'm caught up! Yay! Now I'm awaiting the next chapter. The suspense is killing me!
MASC
2009-10-17 . chapter 18
Crimple's plan seems to have worked. Should we be worried?

No! Not the chair! Why did the chair have to be punished!? Oh well. It was bound to happen. I was the one who destroyed Sporty's airship, after all. ;-)

If Susan did the unthinkable, then my suspicions will be correct.
MASC
2009-10-17 . chapter 17
Actually, if you remember, I couldn't review because I was moving! But then again, I doubt you forgot in the first place so... erm... yeah.

Y'know, I don't remember the last time I sat down for a decent breakfast either! And what the fudge happened to Robbie!? Onward!
MASC
2009-10-17 . chapter 16
Okay, I know I'm gonna get a boot in my ** for being late with the reviews, so allow me to grovel on the floor for forgiveness! Sorry! Sorry! Sorry!

Anyway, Robbie and Susan getting it on! Whoo-hoo! Nastay! I knew it from the moment they met! LOL

"In the name of science!" LMAO Crimple is officially my new favorite character. :-D
crazedromancer
2009-10-12 . chapter 19
oh man! no!! gotta hope sportacus and robbie come thru!
babis29
2009-09-25 . chapter 17
Oh, oh I wonder what happened,hope robbies ok in cant wait for an update congrats excellent story; keep up the good job!
MASC
2009-09-15 . chapter 15
She was faking it!? Whoa... okay, that explains it. I was starting to wonder. But she really did get caught in the explosion and the anibodies helped cure her? Nice.

I can see now that Pinky and Big Blue are together again, you'll be making up for lost time with all the mushy stuff.
;-)

Susan's MIA. Hmm... I wonder...
MASC
2009-09-09 . chapter 14
Damn, she remembered fast! Guess her head wasn't as messed up as we were led to believe.

Call me crazy but did I see Robbie actually *flirting* with that nurse!? Hoo-hoo... maybe she'll find another reason to want to stay in town with Stephanie. ;-)
MASC
2009-09-02 . chapter 13
Cameras? Suspicions? For good reason. Will the Ministy be making another house call, perhaps?

So her memory is starting to come back is it? Good news. That was pretty fast but I guess you don't really forget people as nice as them. Will Susan be making a permanent stay or... *gasp* I just had a thought! But I won't say anything because I might spoil it... ;-)
MASC
2009-08-25 . chapter 12
You're really tapping into some deep emotional well with Mayor here. Nicely done. :-) His reaction is justified.

Sporty actually went through with the lie! Amazing. And it all fit so perfectly with the cop's notes.

Hopefully a tearful reunion is in store for him and The Pink One, yes? ;-)
MASC
2009-08-19 . chapter 11
“You’re a politician for Christ’s sake! They lie all the time!” LMAO! Too true! I wonder why no one has ever tapped into that part of the mayor before!?

Oh and the neuralizer was a nice touch. Sometimes I wish I had one.

And so the plot thickens. :-D
MASC
2009-08-10 . chapter 10
Ah, NOW I see why Robbie's so paranoid! That's not good. But man, it makes the whole thing a lot more suspenseful! I can't wait to see how the questioning goes down. Do you think Big Blue has it in him to lie if he has to? Will it be neccessary? Ignore me, I'm rambling. O_O
MASC
2009-08-09 . chapter 9
I'm starting to think the alerts aren't working. Well for me, at least. T_T

Anyway, I think it's funny how Sportacus will forever be branded with such an amusing air-guitar performance. Soon he'll be making a career out of it, LOL

What's going on with Robbie? He seems a bit spooked. He doesn't think that the Pink One is still alive, does he? O_o
MASC
2009-07-31 . chapter 8
It's all coming back to her more or less, isn't it? The blue room was a nice touch and the picture in her head she just *had* to draw. I'm sure nurse lady will be sad when she has to let Pinky go. :-(
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