 Sailor Comet 2009-07-31 . chapter 1This fic made me cry. And also laugh. And then feel guilty for laughing.
Amazing writing. |
 RTF88 Restarted 2009-07-09 . chapter 1This story was so amazing! It made me cry more than once and you did a great job keeping the characters true to how they're presented in the games. It was sad but, in a way, awesome. I read it all the other day and then just read half of it again before I made myself stop. If you have any other stories, I'll go check them out =)
Btw, I was curious as to how long it is in Microsoft Word...in Times New Roman font size 12 it's 74 pages. I can't imagine how long it took for you to write this, but again you did a really good job. |
 FriggyEsquire 2009-07-08 . chapter 1This moved me to tears. Great, big, sobbing tears. This is amazing in ways I can't explain. |
 sadie-lady-nami 2009-06-04 . chapter 1Oh. My. God.
This is a masterfully written work that made me laugh and cry at the same time. Each character's emotions come through so cleanly, it's very believeable... Part of me is actually disappointed that this isn't how the game ended. I fell in love with your style, it's phenomenal.
LOVE the Chords of Spaghetti line. Made me laugh. =D |
 rlsefromtheashes 2009-06-03 . chapter 1Stunning. And wonderfully lengthy, to boot! This is perfectly written. I could feel your emotion in every sentence. And thank you so much for having a bit of ApolloxVera in it, too. Again, amazing job. |
 Rahh Gumba Foo 2009-06-02 . chapter 1This story was absolutely heartbreaking. This took me such a long time to finish reading. I'm so glad I was able to finish it. It's so poignant. I could relate to every single word you wrote. Oh, and being a musical theatre major myself, I liked the fact that Phoenix was a theatre major in this story. A small detail, but one that stuck out at me.
Plain and simple, this was amazing! |
 SyberiaWinx 2009-06-01 . chapter 1Good story.^^ Very heartbreaking.;-;
There are some inconsistencies, like the poison killing Trucy in seconds when about the same amount just put Vera in a coma and Trucy not wearing her gloves, but those can be explained. |
 Calista Lithing 2009-06-01 . chapter 1I'm not exactly sure as to what to say. I'd try to come up with a fitting adjective, but I can barely see the computer screen through my tears.
I spent almost three hours reading this, and every word you wrote made each second well worth it. Like Apollo says - I can't see this as anything other than a miracle.
Thank you, and wonderful work. |