after over a year of waiting for a fic worth reading, finally! Pls do continue this fic.

As for the critique..where to begin...Well, first off, a good read for me is that which captures a character's essence so beautifully that it doesn't need an a plot. With this standard, I'd say this is a great read.

H&M, they're really that beautiful huh...people can't stop obsessing about them even though it's been years since SM was aired. Hope it lasts. Thank you, my friend, for helping keep them alive.

i'm starting to warm up to these michiru and haruka stories. i just love stories that keep the young ladies as senshi. great writing.

I'm so happy you're back! This story is AMAZING so far! Pleaasee continue it! =D

umm, and i wouldnt mind at all if you changed the rating to M ...

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hi bainaku

i've been reading Haruka and Michiru's fanfics for over four years and i've never written a review to any author before. Not only because of my my lazyness, lol, but for me being a little bit critict about stories.
I would really apreciate if you continue writing. Youre not just a regular person writing a paper
you seem to understand their personalities and as you write, gives me the impression of Haruka and Michiru reacting as they would if they were real people. So, therefore, please continue writing. I will for sure follow your work.

-part 2-

Damn it! Before I continue-I just noticed that there is a second part attached to this! Oh god, how could I have been so blind?!

-back to the review-

You portray them so well- so damn well- that it simply never feels as though I´m reading something that didn´t happen in SM.
You´re very subtile- and very convincing in it too.

You´ve simply captured their little mindgames, those little cat and mouse- who´s gonna break first games.
I love it.
And trust me- I´m not one to use the L word carelessly.

Harukas rough passion, Michirus strong elegance- their shared burden. It´s so powerfull in your writings.
Breathtaking. Breathtaking and real.

Haruka would hide her tears. Michiru wouldn´t give into them. (Just to give agreat example)

And I just adore (such a cheesy word!) the way you manage to capture Michirus playfullness-and her flirting. She is rather bold when it comes into luring Haruka out of her reserve--and not alot of writers acknowledge that part of her personality.

You certainly have a very deep understanding of human nature-AND, you´re even able to dive into other characters heads, without controling their minds.

They surprise me, and that is a very hard thing to do. To get a character so well- to nail them so good- that-DAMN!--soon

Ok...let me be the one to give you a fine little shove towards another chapter. I´ll do it gladly- and that shove can be rearanged into a full blown punch if you want to.

Hohohoho-no worries, I´m still sane. But it´s almost one in the morning here--and here I am, just finished this little one-shot.

And boy-am I glad-after one long year of absence I returned here, checked my favourites, and- to my great delight- found that you have written another story.


Puh-I really don´t know what to say. No idea, not even the slightest. You are one of the two writers on FF (on my list anyway!) I would, without a single doubt, call perfect- in every single prospect there is.(the other being Prometheus United-CHIAROSCURO)

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And because I really don´t know where to start, what advice to give...I´ll just write the first thing that comes to my mind.
(won´t be logical)


So! Listen up!

Since they are the main characters here, I will simply start with Haruka and Michiru.

-next page-or pm?-10 words?!

This is so sweet and so beautiful I hardly can express.
I loved what you did with words :) You describe the things, the people and even the feelings so well and so... refreshing.
The scene in the kitchen was amazing and sensual :)
And how Michi got bitemarks and kept them... it was heartwarming :) I couldn't help but smile when Haruka tried to kick Michi in her sleep :) It was funny, yet cute :)

And my fave line, probaly, would be this one - 'She looked like she belonged to someone else, and she liked it'
Aww, it says it all :)

Wonderful job! Please keep on writing :)
Best regards,
RubyNury

Fluffy hats be damned, I'd give you fluffy everything! This written work of yours is a delight to read - as well as re-read. It filled my heart with acute warmth and nostalgia for you've given these childhood heros of mine justice. Thank you very much.

i'm so glad you've decided to continue writing this, it is amazing!!

i think you should write in some smut and change this into an M ;) lol. Love the playfulness of Michiru. Your description is great i hope to read more very soon!

Great job! u should go on!

I wrote a review again... and lost it. :(
Anyway, in short, you deserve those fluffy hats and I would LOVE to hear more from you, on this story or otherwise. Beautiful, beautiful, subtle writing.

do continue?!
So cute. I am so excited to see that Michiru was also Haruka's first...I hate it when the authors make Haruka into this big player and has had sex with the entire school before finding Michiru.

Keep up the good work, I'm anxiously awaiting more!

Wonderful writing, please continue.

very good keep going