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Reviews for: What's a Battle Waitress?
Azelf1717
2009-09-20 . chapter 2
Hey you updated this so quick how come you aren't now?
CCharmanderK
2009-07-06 . chapter 2
Not bad. Improve the writing a little and get rid of the "next time" parts and it'll be great!
Jordan Relinquish
2009-06-15 . chapter 2
MIKURU BEAM FTW! (by the way good job with the story)
AshK
2009-06-03 . chapter 2
Good work on this update! Keep on Keepin' On!
AshK
2009-06-02 . chapter 1
Good work! There is a Season II of Melancholy? Good start to what loos to be an excellent story!
GammaTron
2009-06-02 . chapter 1
One hundred billion belli on it being Luffy. NAMI, STAY AWAY FROM MY MONEY!
Artic: *Pounces* I've got you this time, Nami!
Ric: *age 25* *tackles Artic* Here you go, my lady. *Pays her twenty million belli*
Nami: *runs off*
Artic: Can't wait for teh update.
Technomaru
2009-06-01 . chapter 1
good start!

I'm liking how it goes and how powerful Mikuru really is!
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