 eyes 4 edward only 2009-11-14 . chapter 1WOW that was really good. i wish you made into a story. :) |
 may-bell-rose 2009-11-13 . chapter 1Loved it damn why can't we all have hotties like edward?!?!
MBRxoxox |
 Mrs.EdwardACullen 2009-11-07 . chapter 1i want more i think that u could have a great story if you go on. and love it ;] ;] ;]
plz plz go on ;] ;] ;] |
 musicismyedward 2009-11-07 . chapter 2I love it aren't you going to write more? |
 twilightismydrug 2009-11-01 . chapter 1i dont even know what to write. but you should totally make this into a real story not just a one-shot. cuz that was hot! |
 LastRedAppleStanding 2009-09-20 . chapter 2are you gonna finish this? |
 georgia 2009-09-02 . chapter 2 THAT story is absolutely brilliant and you should write some more of it |
 Samirabws 2009-08-29 . chapter 2love it |
 storylover10 2009-08-19 . chapter 1hey there! love the story, the plot is amazing! i know it's much to ask but could you please make a full story out of this. the thought of edward being a ganster and bella a mafia princess is hot, intriguing. it would be a lot of fun to see how edward act as a mob king. bella selling drogs and shooting guns is thriling! please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please |
 brixy 2009-08-10 . chapter 2 DAMN!
i read it wrong!! for some reason i thought this was gonna be a long story!1
i am so stupid!
aw well it was still great! |
 brixy 2009-08-10 . chapter 1 just the first chapter and im already in love with it! |
 Bella's Decathexis 2009-08-10 . chapter 1lmao... That Edward sounds somewhat frightening... I wonder how he would react if he had a daughter... |
 Lali Motoko 2009-08-07 . chapter 1OMFG! Congratulations for the amazing story! Seriously I love it! Great job! I think you should continue this fanfic! Please keep writing!^^ |
 kneon 2009-08-05 . chapter 1Good story. |
 Fan 2009-07-27 . chapter 1 Really great story! I know I didn't know about the contest when it was going on, but if I had, I definitely would've voted for yours! |