WOW! I loved it! Great little fic :D

ahh! can't weait for next update so ucken good

The story was amazing, is this a one shot or an actual story?

Wow.. This sounds like a good intro! I'll put you on my alerts, just in case. :)

Hey, Just wanted to say that I loved this fic and I am wondering if you would consider extending it past a one-shot? It would be great if you did :) You have a great writing technique :)

excellent story.

good chapter

I know you wrote this a while ago but I'm just getting around to reading all the entries into the age of Edward contest and you are a very talented writer. I loved this one shot. Thank you

This would be awesome to extend. It was great! :)

looooove it is there going to be more?

keep doing what your doing...!

Update soon please(:

Very mobstery. Love it!

Xela

I was so upset when I got to the end of this story and remembered it was only a one shot. I so bad wanted this to be a full story and read about Bella and Edward in the mob together. Did I mention I loved it? I loved that you set it in the 1920's but Iit would also be cool if you set it in our time. I've read alot of mob stories with Bella and Edward and what I really like about yours is the fact that she wants to be part it not just the housewife that the mob man comes home to. I like that kind of things where she knows what's going on don't get me wrong but reading a story like yours where she is in the thick of the business would be something different and really enjoyable to read. I loved it as I said before and I would love to read more if you decided to continue this story or even update it.

very good!

This should so be a chaptered fic!