AWESOME~!

good story, however i think you made Rikku a little out of character, either way it was good. nice job.

anyway all the best
silentshadow55

I don't like it -.- HEHEHE.

I mean, I do. But I don't. Lol. Do another one with the correct pairings eh? :D

Don't get me wrong I do like your story very much. Even though the twisted idea was madness for me. Yuna was always meant to be with Tidus, likewise. That's all that matters. But then as the story goes along, I'm kinda okay with it.

Until the part where Rikku says she didn't understand why Yuna would cry over a man who rejected her even though she's married. I mean, Yuna had loved Tidus always. Strange why Rikku would doubt it.

But yeah, nice shot.

I just wish you can change what Rikku said. Something like "Somehow I pity Yunie.. all those sacrifices she made for Tidus. All her love. But I can't stop loving Tidus, can I?"

Good luck!

I actually thought it was pretty good. However it felt like you rushed the wedding part. You didn't explain it well so when i read it it was hard to picture it and it sounded weird haha.besides that part i thought it was very intresting. keep writing!

You don't have to be mean to her. I find this fan fic very good and entertaining. Maybe she just wanted to get some people's opinions.
Keep writing Roxas. Can't wait to read more =)