I'll review every chapter here! But firstly, overall, I really enjoyed this. I mean, there were a few spelling/grammar errors here and there, but the actual story was so lovable^^ To be honest, I always thought that Capell/Faina was a cute couple, but I prefer Capell/Aya because that guy needs a girl who'll keep him in check ;)

So chapter 1 - this was one of the cutest, if not the cutest. In particular, I love the ending scene, with Capell, Aya and baby Sigmund (BABY SIGMUND!! I love it! That's adorable !!)
Chapter 2 - I loved the part from Edward's POV about his loyalty to Sigmund, that was one of my fave things in the game. I also thought the part about Capell thinking about Aya's panties was so funny, especially that everything reminded him of them! Was that a secret scene in the game? Sure I didn't see it~
Chapter 3 - this was rather funny, especially how the kids are so curious and the adults are not helping, lol! And you had a father/son moment!! And I loved Michelle's lines, you captured her perfectly! I was longing for Signmund to return in the game, but instead I setle for squealing happily whenever they talk to each other on my second playthrough :)
Chapter 4 - my favourite! I think that's a stroke of genius how he bought them all umbrellas, lol! I think the aristos would feel left out though, lol^^ And he bought Aya a red one - huge slip-up there Capell, hehe!
Chapter 5 - this was good too, though I felt sorry for Faina stumbling upon them like that.. and you make her sound quite devious!! Hmm...
Chapter 6 - Some more heart-warming Capell/Aya scenes. It kind explains some of the things you know they were thinking, but never said aloud. I also thought that Saranda's feelings for Leonid were quite unsided, seeing that he was srather unhinged. But that's just me.
Sorry this is long, but I wanted to fit everything I had to say into one review :)

HA HA! These two chapters are really fun! I 'm waiting for your next chapter. Good luck and please update as soon as possible!

Good job! I really like your story! This story showed me other point of view and that made this story so interesting. Please update as soon as possible. I will be waiting for your next chapter.