this is beautiful. thank you so much for writing this! :) it gave me some sort of closure for the ending of Paradise Kiss.

I agree that the series didn't go into yuka-hiro's relationship.. i like them as much as yuka-george.. she deserves happiness and normalcy.. something like that. *shrugs* this was well written. I enjoyed it, thanks.

Omg. I cannot describ how this moved my romantic soul. You did the chracters, especially Yukari's feeling towards her lovers quite beautifully. I love the detail about her constantly falling in love with tortured artistic souls XD But most of all I loved the yukarixhiro in this. Yes I am part of that very obselete minority of parakiss fans whom actually love the couple. Other than a few typos this fanfic is perfect!

I loveed it 3 I watched P. Kiss when I was younger and I really didn't like it that Yukari ended up with Tokumori, but then, now that I'm a bit older, I do understand it better :)

They compliment each other in a way that I can't explain :)

Nice job with the story :D

Wow. You've completely captured the whole feeling of ParaKiss in this. Your writing is amazing. (and I love the title, lol!)

i've lost count of how many times i've come back to this page to just read this story.

i just love it so much that its hard to forget.

great job writing it.

Mm, very good, very good. I'm so pleased to find a fic exploring the reasons why Yukari did end up with Hiroyuki rather than Dynamic!George. Not that you need my approval or anything (haha) but I really like the way you wrote her relationship with Hiro. He makes so much sense in this fic, and if I were her, I'd totally marry him myself. And the little glimpses into their sexual lives was a nice bonus. ;)

it was a nice story. a good portrayal of hiroyuki's and yukari's characters. i really didn't get it why yukari ended up with hiro. their pairing was not really established that much in both the anime and manga. but i was glad that they ended up together anyway. this story kinda justifies their relationship. keep writing good stories. :)

Thank you thank you thank you! There should be more Hiroyuki stories around, especially since he's ideal fanfiction fodder; so many hooks relating to him, yet so little 'screentime'... and yes, I do agree hte ending of Paradise Kiss was way too much 'an then she settled down with Hiro kthxbai' for my own taste!

So I'm glad you came up with this story. It is wonderfully written, to boot.

Do keep writing.

Milly

A MUST LOVE story.

I don't know, but I kind of just can't stand George somtimes. He's somehow like a feather, alwys blown and flown away by the wind. It's hard to read, it's harder to stay with him longer than he wnts you to. so, basically, i think Yukari is best off with someonr else. In you story, as it is, our DOCTOR DUDE, I can accept this pair as it has much more potential to survive than that with George.

That was a nice short story. I think it portrayed Yukari's feelings very well. I enjoyed the little inputs too. Great writing and a good read(:

I actually really liked this. I don't have any constructive criticism to offer. Much to many people's surprise, I love Hiroyuki and Yukari together. I don't think it would have worked out for her and George. Thanks for sharing! I loved the last paragraph! )

That a superb character study/fanfiction. Your writing is exceptional. I love this pairing, and I wish there was more fanfics like this. I think your understanding of the characters is apparent and your writing reflected them quite well. And the little bit of sex gave it a good, realistic touch. Very Yazawa like.

There needs to be more Yukari/Hiroyuki fics, since it's understandable why George and she never ended up together. Thank you, please write more! :)

There aren't many happy Yukari x Hiroyuki fanfictions out there, so imagine my delight when I stumbled across yours.

It's a wonderful fanfiction! True to the characters, excellently written... witty, humorous, a bit sad. D

the best damn thing i've ever read about this pairing...

THANK U SO MUCH!