Once she had found a nice quiet spot on the edge of the gather, she sat down on the ground under the shade of a tall tree and untied the twine on her package. She wrapped the long piece of twine around her had and peeled back the cloth wrapping. You mean hand do you not?

Lovely, well written, good interaction, and I can't wait for the next chapter.

Overall I am enjoying the background of Cove Weyr its background is something I can see in my mind. :) Along with the background in the first chapter too.

What time is this taking place?

Overal well written. Good interaction between folks.

As Ionnaestood a blue fire lizard of her first five,
named Rain, landed on her shoulder. Rain was strange
for a number of reasons, the most prominent reason
was the fact that, despite of color, Rain was female,
and of that she was certain. It was that or brown
Trigger, also of the first five, was. Ionnae was two
hundred and ninety-seven percent sure it was Rain.
You forgot a space 'Ionnae stood' Having a blue fire
lizard as a female, nice twist.
“Uh…” Grin stopped swimming in circles and

Ionnaecocked an eyebrow at him, “Give Grin not that
look! Grin remember! Grin remember! You see! You
see!” Grin paused again, “Denni said! Denni said…
Right! Denni say to tell Onae that… Denni say warn
Onae that there a man on beach few beaches to east!
Yeah! That it! That it! See! See! Grin remember! Grin
remember!”
Your forgot a space "Ionnae cocked" real nice
interaction. Overal great interaction!

More please. I want to know why dragon rider is upset, and why Ionnae is living on beach

Hi just read chapter 1 of your story it was very good and funny to. I like the name Talleia. Can't wait for the next chapter. To see way the dragonman was crying. And to see what Goof and Silly are up to.