 Pernicia 2009-06-11 . chapter 1Despite your dislike of the shipping (which I understand, I don't really like them as much either), you did a wonderful job with pretty much everything: Fiyero's (Scarecrow's) mindless comments (especially the dislike of people in power), capturing Boq's feelings, and the general mood.
Maybe, if you don't like Gloq, you could have a backstory of Scarecrow's farm, making it also a Fiyeraba (unless you don't like that ship either, that's okay too. I just like the opportunity you've left open for a amnesaic (sp?) Scarecrow meets Wicked Elphaba...)
Keep it up! |