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iCream
2009-10-11 . chapter 1
I like. Lelouch's mental processes make perfect sense.
xXxSapphireJewelxXx
2009-08-21 . chapter 12
Wow! That was an awsome storyXD. Really a great story, the way you wrote Schneizel(sp?) seemed like the real one from the show. Truly amazing^^
Kawaii-Kunoichi
2009-08-07 . chapter 12
:) loved lulu sleep 'rape'
Kiseki_nKoi
2009-07-28 . chapter 12
chapter 12 O_O??!
XD!!
wonderful
dragon_fly126@yahoo.com
2009-07-27 . chapter 12
Loved this scence!
Star Jinin
2009-07-24 . chapter 12
OMG you spoil us too much! :D And I love you for using the chess piece idea! And thanks to your delicious imagery, I'm pretty sure I'll never rewatch R2 while looking at Lelouch the same way again!

Suzaku's side story? OMGOMGOMG LUV YOU. Suzaku needs more 'screentime' in this fic! It'll be fun to see his thoughts after he gets past the initial thoughts of 'OMG the white king and black king are sleeping together' and get his mind wrapped around the fact that 'OMG my friend/lover Lelouch and _Schneizel_ are sleeping together'!
Patet
2009-07-24 . chapter 12
Gack~! I never realized that there were gonna be sides stories... this is hot... man...
SoulSister
2009-07-23 . chapter 12
How could we possibly get sick of the **? As long as you're willing to supply, I'm willing to read. Bless the mind that came up with that chess piece business.
profond bordeaux
2009-07-23 . chapter 12
Whoa. I don't think I'll ever look at chess pieces the right way anymore. Nicely written.
SuMMerStarZ
2009-07-19 . chapter 1
I'm usually not into SchniezelXLelouch, but this fic is fabulous! I totally believed all of the characters. Schniezel was dead on! Lelouch was too! Such a steamy fic lol I look forward to reading more!
Yaoi-chon
2009-07-12 . chapter 1
what can i say? you are an amazing romance writer, your smut is fantastic... if only you could give me some pointers! your writing was so incredible... i found myself crying... i dont know where i just suddenly realized this was so... BREATHTAKING, and i just NEEDED to cry.
well done, you deserve an award or something for one of the best... no, THE BEST fanfic i have ever read... EVER! i eagerly await the next installment!^^
IDetestTragedy
2009-07-12 . chapter 11
Bravissimo! If there is any fanfic that actually manages to make me squeal with joy and awe on every chapter, this is it. This is... this is... this is how the canon series is supposed to be! Woe, you don't work for Sunrise as one of the anime staff.

By all means, yeah, you should grab a beta reader or two. It's a pity that such wonderful masterpiece is tarnished with a typo like this: “I will get straight to the point, Knight of One, Suzaku Kururgi. I have taken Lelouch as my lover, and I am not willing to share.” (Kururugi's mispelling in chapter 11)

You're genious! Oh boy, I'm too exited to wait for your next work!
dragon_fly126@yahoo.com
2009-07-12 . chapter 11
This was a wonderful fic. I love this pairing but there's so few quality fics around for them. Great Job!
JerichoGirl
2009-07-10 . chapter 11
WOW! What a great story, I loved it so much. I really liked this chapter and the ending was really good. Please tell me you're going to begin the 2nd arc of this fic soon, because I can't wait to read more of this lovely fic. Anyway, a great end to a great fic.
Star Jinin
2009-07-09 . chapter 11
I feel terrible for not reviewing, but I was denied internet for almost a week.

YES. THANK YOU for the Cornelia scene!ThoughIfeel so bad for Suzaku! HOW DARE SHE DEFILE HIS FACE! Though I wish Schneizel was slapped instead :D He deserves it...but I wouldn't love him in this fic as much had you wrote him any other way!

AWW on the love confession!:D Exactly how I imagined their relationship to be! You didn't actually kill Nunnally off, did you? I wouldn't complain TOO much if you did, but I still want to know her fate.

GIMME THE SECOND ARC!!
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