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EnderGrievesForMe14 12/11/10 . chapter 1
That was really good. I had to smile at how you pictured Mello. It was the whole "mightier than thou" thing that made me like him so much, I think. And Matt was just awesome. ;D

Though I thought I might ask about one thing. Did you mean to say Matt's name twice before he introduced himself? I'm sure everyone knew who he was, but I just wanted to ask. Thanks for the awesome read! It's definitely going on my favorites.
Aqua-Dawn 9/12/10 . chapter 1
Wow... this is exactly how I would picture the two if Kira had never been. Love how you've written Mello (he's so full of himself XD) and the idea of adding a part from poor Jenny's point of view was brilliant. Love the ending D Mello doesn't realize that Matt planned it all 3
IFeelAliveAgain 8/4/10 . chapter 1
I love this story. So much.
Darkfire359 7/14/10 . chapter 1
Yay for muffins! Teeheehee Mello scares people.
Your Silver Lining 10/18/09 . chapter 1
*GASPS* This is almost identical to a multi-chaptered fic that I'm going to work on pretty soon. But I'm not sure anymore...this one-shot was way too good. I love Mello's brilliant characterization and his inflated ego. I would have liked to see a bit more of Matt and his plan (which had me cracking up in the end by the way).
But nonetheless awesome job! I can't wait for more from you.
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Xxanime'obcessedxX 8/29/09 . chapter 1
OMG I FRIEKIN LOVE MELLO.

lmfao. i think that you MUST continue this because its TOO DAMN GOOD to leave like that...and cause i'll cry xD lol.

awesome story xD
TheMostPatheticNameEver 8/28/09 . chapter 1
This was cool. Especially that it all was a part of Matt's plan. That's hilarious. XD AMAZINGNESS!
stuckinvelvetsnow 8/26/09 . chapter 1
That was pretty good. You should continue it .

Please? *puppy eyes*
Dlvvanzor 7/6/09 . chapter 1
Wow! That was... really hot! NICE description of Matt... drool...
just a kid 1993 6/3/09 . chapter 1
O.O a friend told me you did the best mello x matt story's and she wasn't lying they really are the best

i loved this I'm so going to read more of you're stuff
puddingcup 6/3/09 . chapter 1
xD YAY!

lol Mello's so funny... just about everything he does makes me laugh xD

Matt's Master Plan of Awesomeness! yay Matt!

awesome story by the way!
powderpuff 6/3/09 . chapter 1
Nice XD. Mello seems like a slut, but I LOVE it XD
xxbeyondxbirthdayxx 6/2/09 . chapter 1
I loved it !
Snow-Fish 6/2/09 . chapter 1
Poor, poor Jenny. Really funny, and I have to agree with Mello, I mean who drinks coffee? Apart from millions of people worldwide I mean... Chocolate is so much better... x
ParaPara 6/1/09 . chapter 1
Oh god.. this was just one adorable one-shot.
How 'bout them convenient coffee shops, eh? Mello grabbed a Matty outta it. ;D

Awesome job!

I'd love to see another MxM one shot from you.

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