Wow... THat was... Amazing. I like this kind of Omi. I hope to read more stuff like this. I really, really like it. It's the way I imagined Omi to be in reality sometimes. Great work. Really.

Thats good, i like it.

*in marker* I like the reflections on a smile-Unicorn

-big eyes- o... if you want to make that a series, go ahead! -hint hint
that's a very interesting story plot, lol. continue!

...*thinks that Liz is going into x-rated thoughtedness AGAIN*. oh, btw, this is Vic the CB incase you didn't know.

I think it would be great if you turned this into a series! I'm a sucker for angst! _ I also like the whole concept of Omi's secret life. Please, write more! *makes chibi-eyes*

ooooooh a series? that sounds wonderful. well good luck. i luv the lil angsty thing.

ooh. it was quite nice...pretty deep

continue ne!