sweet *waiting for next chappie*

Kaname so cute. He's having a fangache and was embarassed to face Zero. I like his neediness when Zero came home, and all those sweet talks and actions. I could feel the love between them. Please continue

...PLEASE...update...
I`m dying here

Hi again! Oh, well, after this exposure of Kaname's failed atempts to relieve his toothache, I can perfectly understand that Zero wanted to try...um... some other distraction. Poor pureblood, I nearly started to suffer from fang ache in simpathy.

“Grate some garlic and tie it to the opposite wrist?.." Are that kind of remedies REAL? Girl, what kind of disgusting things can do people to avoid dentists *rolls eyes* “Yesh, Zhero… it shiftsh…” *giggles* That's one of the cutest things I've heard Kaname saying. I can't imagine the character from the manga in such a situation but you did it very funny... at his expense :D

I can't belive that such a simple thing as a toothache can be so difficult to manage *gigles again* But it makes perfectly sense that neither of then know the clinic's adress. And all the friends out of reach...

Mm, why I have the feeling that the fang will fall after some love making? Are you going to be so cruel to torture the dear pureblood with the other fang?

And loved how they were worried for one another all the time: "I can't drink from you, you're ill". "No, silly, I injured you first". "Oh, well, are you sure?". "Yes, please, do it". Two love birds :p

Two more chapters? Well, hope so, now that things are getting closer to the...er, ignition point ;) Zero would have to be extremely gentle or not kiss Kaname at all, although. I will love to see how they do it! Thanks for updating so fast after FTDF, Leen, I know how difficult it is to update twice in a week. Love your chapters, as always, but don't get stressed, I'm sure we all will be here waiting for the next one :D

It's another great chapter in this lovely story. Their interactions are so well written. The way they speak to each other and their thought processes seem very believable.
Once again I'm at a loss as to what Zero thinks he can do. I'll look forward to finding out in your next chapter.

If you'd told me that somebody could write a story about a toothache and I'd be waiting for the next installment, I would have laughed at you--but nonetheless, I want to know what Zero is going to do. Actually I can't imagine what he has just thought of to help Kaname, but I'm definitely intrigued. I really like the sweetness and protectiveness that Zero is showing toward Kaname, and Kaname's open vulnerability is unexpected but interesting. I really look forward to whatever your imagination is cooking up. :)

I am hopeless in love with your story,
thank you very much for this update!
I think they could really be like that,
you stay in character each of them have.

Looking forward to the next chapter :)

Yes, agree this is a fast update but finish that last chapter of FTDF, Leen! *gives you huge, beseeching eyes*

Well, it’s OK since this chapter is awesome too! *hearts* Leen, you write sweetness so, so well! Your Zero is lovely and caring, of course, but your version of a uke-ish Kaname is so….. so awesomely, heartbreakingly sweet! And so damn believable too! *wants to hug him so badly*

I don’t know how you do it – he’s still Kaname, he’s still a pureblood… and yet, there is such a sweetness in him, in how he treats Zero, in how he lets himself be comforted and cuddled by the hunter that is just… gah! *clutches at her hair, having run out of words* Love him!

OK Yen, start at the beginning! Ah, I knew Zero would be more concerned about the wreckage than himself! *nods* That’s so him! LOL, that’s a nicely random thought about bruises, coming to Zero at the right time – random thoughts always come out of nowhere :D

Yup, Kaname is (as we all expected and anticipated) rightly guilty about hurting Zero and not caring even a hoot about the bathroom damage *nods again* That’s so him too! I liked how Kaname was so relieved in hearing Zero scold him – the hunter does mother the pureblood sometimes but it’s so perfect like that! *hearts* Their relationship is perfect too – they do care more about each other’s health than their own! *grins happily*

‘Not that “keeping in bed” is necessarily a bad thing’ – LOL, we agree!

Typical Zero, trying to make Kaname less guilty. LOL yes, slamming into a wall does nothing for memory at all! So sweet of Zero to cuddle Kaname in bed and it’s so cute when the pureblood lisps! *is totally enraptured* ‘“Yesh, Zhero… it shiftsh…”’ – kya!!

Aw, the poor darling! To actually be that desperate in wanting to go to the clinic only he didn’t know where that was! *sniffles* I loved that little flashback on how concerned Kaname can get about Zero – about not even waiting to get home before giving him his blood… *hopes the limo driver has a clothespeg on his nose*

Well, we all know that Kaname keeping Zero in bed is a good thing, no? *winks*

Aw again, to be so desperate that Kaname even called the honeymoon couple? *snickers madly at Aido following them* What, Zero, you didn’t know they were a threesome? *large, innocent eyes*

LOL, so the notebook was thrashed twice! *giggles* Oh, the remedies! *giggles again* Yes, some of them sound really strange but OMG! O.O To think that the poor pureblood was so desperate that he actually tried what he could! *speechless, tearful and wants to hug him so badly*

Bravo, Zero! *applauds wildly as the little massage helps* ‘“Is it in the list?”’ – aw…! *melts at almost child-like response* So…. cute! Even if it wasn’t a real remedy…

Damn, blood lust almost never comes at the right moment, does it? So like Zero wanting to get tablets and so like Kaname wanting Zero to bite him! *giggles and coos at both of them*

Yes, Kaname can be an idiot, but such an awesomely lovable one that we just can’t help falling in love with him! *jumps up and down, trying to stop herself from hugging him*

Oh! To think that the mere act of drinking Kaname’s blood also allowed Zero to absorb it for a while! *is relieved and sparkly eyed* So now he knows of the poor thing’s pain and silly, dear fears and all of that horrid frustration! And poor Kaname’s in actual tears of relief! *bursts into tears of relief herself*

Only… Zero can’t go on drinking forever, can he? *bites her lip* Or perhaps Kaname can drink from Zero at the same time to prevent bloodloss? Only his fang hurts… *wonders if Zero is going to get a glass to store his blood for Kaname to drink*

Dang it, now I don’t know if I want you to update FTDF or P! Both, Leen, both!! :D

Agh, I can’t stand it, Kaname’s so….. vulnerable and sweet and cute! *ties herself up so she won’t try to hug him*

I absolutely love the drinking scene! It was cute and touching at once.
So what did Zero come up with to help our poor suffering pureblood? Can't wait to find out! Please go on soon!

Aww, poor Kaname! I hope Zero helps him soon.

Haha...it's hilarious with the whole toothache thing. Kanname is super OOC here, but nevermind, I shall forget about that, since you excluded Yuki. Bwahahaha...never liked Yuki-- *shot*

I have to admit I cant see the two of them living alone without Yuuki but hey I'll let that go since this is a cute concept. So please finish this it really is a very cute story.

I hadn't yet discovered any of your fics until Nineorchids (Cookies) recommended you...and I have to tell you, this story is really good. Both Kaname and Zero's distress is so vivid--you can feel the concern and the worry flowing between them. I'm hoping (and assuming) that Zero will be ok and that poor Kaname will somehow lose/get rid of that tooth and end his agony. Who knew that reading about a toothache could be so entertaining! Seriously, you've made a strange topic interesting. :)

I like this one, showing the love between the two
from a diffrent side, it is lovely and i hope you have some
more!

aw this story is just too perfect.
and such a lovely chapter *grins*
you really left me wondering what could be done to ease Kaname`s pain.humph ...better not start imagining suff.
Update XD soon