| Reviews for The Case of the Deadly Toy Extended Chapter 1 |
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tengland2 4/6/11 . chapter 14This would have read better had the chapters been in order. Had to go back and forth in order for it to make sense. Rather interesting story, once I figured out what was wrong. |
Wheldongrl10 6/17/09 . chapter 11WOW! Such drama! This just keeps getting better and better. You do a great job with cliffhangers and I can't wait to read about how Perry will come to her rescue. He would never let Michael marry her. Put Paul on the job. HA! Great job. |
Captain Weirdo 6/12/09 . chapter 11Wow! Here's hoping she pushes him off the plane, well before they land. haha! cw |
Captain Weirdo 6/9/09 . chapter 10i just finished your story - so far. Loving it so far! You had me going, then wham! I can't wait to read what that skeezy man told Della to make her get on that plane with him! Hurry with an update! cw |