|Reviews for The Case of the Deadly Toy Extended Chapter 1|
| tengland2 4/6/11 . chapter 14
This would have read better had the chapters been in order. Had to go back and forth in order for it to make sense. Rather interesting story, once I figured out what was wrong.
| Wheldongrl10 6/17/09 . chapter 11
WOW! Such drama! This just keeps getting better and better. You do a great job with cliffhangers and I can't wait to read about how Perry will come to her rescue. He would never let Michael marry her. Put Paul on the job. HA! Great job.
| Captain Weirdo 6/12/09 . chapter 11
Here's hoping she pushes him off the plane, well before they land. haha!
| Captain Weirdo 6/9/09 . chapter 10
i just finished your story - so far. Loving it so far! You had me going, then wham! I can't wait to read what that skeezy man told Della to make her get on that plane with him! Hurry with an update!