|Reviews for It will only hurt more later|
| Misila 3/2/13 . chapter 6
So... I've just read the whole fanfic. I finished CoLS two days ago and I'm looking forward to the next book and happened to found this.
English isn't my first language (I'm a proud Spanish :P), so I can't really tell you anything about grammar stuff. But I've liked a lot the way you describe the feelings.
But there is a 'but'. I think Alec is a bit OoC. And that's because... who tries to kill himself when his boyfriend/girlfriend/whatever breaks up with him? I've only seen that on some romantic movies *puke rainbows*, and I'm fairly sure that Alec Lightwood is not the kind of person who would do that. Like: 'Oh, my boyfriend has told me he doesn't love me, and I don't know how or why, but suddenly I remember every single bad thing that has happened to me and feel guilty for my little brother's death and I commit suicide'.
I've written that long thing because I can't remember the exact word to describe what I mean (I've already said I'm not English, don't kill me xD), but now I think I've found the right words: don't you think Alec has overreacted a bit?
I'm not anyway teasing you, as I've said I like how you write; I'm just pointing that. I mean, if you want Alec to commit suicide, it's your story (and I'm a sadistic and I really love reading angsty things). But I think there are a lot of reasons to explain that decision, not only a break-up (besides, somehow that reminds me of Twilight and how Bella tries to teach us that being depressed for months when your boyfriend leaves you is OK, and I sort of can't stand the whole Twilight thing).
So... I'm just saying that. Don't be mad at me, pleas, because I've really really enjoyed reading it.
| Guest 8/26/12 . chapter 2
This sucks I love the couple by u make them pathetic...
| gleekforever63 5/23/12 . chapter 6
Great story! Love seeing this problem addressed, even though it's always sad
| Suzanna 8/24/11 . chapter 6
hey! I looooved your story, Alec and Magnus are just so cue together! And you captured their characters really well, too. Just a thought, you might want to change the genre from tragedy to hurt/comfort because tragedy implies that there is a sad ending, which might deter people from reading it, which would be a shame because Alec and Magnus get back together in the end.
| Zanawolf 3/26/11 . chapter 6
Bane actually means "Disappointment". But I loved the whole story. It makes me think of what would really happen. Would Magnus find a way to become mortal, make Alec immortal? Or will they be split apart by time?
| QuestionMarksAndCommas 9/18/10 . chapter 5
I'm in love with this so far.
I'm going to have to finish reading it tomorrow, so I'm really looking to finishing it. :3
| animefangirl55 6/25/10 . chapter 6
Noooooooooo! The stories over! :(
This was really good! You should totally write a sequel! Maybe something about how they get through the immortality problem! Just please WRITE MORE!
| BlackandBane 10/6/09 . chapter 6
I loved your story It will only hurt more later! You should totally write a sequel.
| DarknessLightsTheWorld 9/16/09 . chapter 6
| Theamericangirlnextdoor 9/10/09 . chapter 6
Great story! Poor Alec and Magnus! Thanks for the awesome story!
| AradiaLoveless 9/9/09 . chapter 6
WOW, very beautiful. Great Job!
| Isclanel 8/30/09 . chapter 6
Why the hell haven't I read this before! It was amazing and heartfelt enough to make me cry. Definitely a new addition to my favourites list! Oh, and a sequel would be greatly appreciated.
| lynxzpanther 8/23/09 . chapter 6
wow... i think that has to be the most amazing story i've read yet. :)
| Frizwizz 8/14/09 . chapter 6
Please write a sequel this story was really good thanks.
| Donut37 7/10/09 . chapter 6
Really good. I think you should write a sequal