I like this, shows more of the inner workings of Sai than most writers put into it.

this is so angsty and dark. ur writing is really creative and detailed. i cant wait to see where this is going.

this was so haunting, yet so well-written and beautiful. i loved this piece and hope you continue with it. you have a great writing style and lovely story ideas.

GO RIP THEIR SPINES OUT OF THEIR BACKS AND SHOVE THE SPINES DOWN THEIR THROATS. GO, SAKURA!

Goodness, poor Sai! Sakura's reactions to everything were spot-on.

Amazing story!

I hope this isn't the end. I'd like to see Sakura and Naruto kick the asses of the people who did this.

This was amazing. I loved Sakura's reaction to finding out about this - her horror at what the people had done to Sai was excellent as was Sai reciting the ramen book again - that just about broke me.

However, while I love this, the whole, 'this is dangerous, the healing was hard section'... it's *good* in that it makes sense for the story and is decently written, but it also feels like something I've read multiple times before.

On the whole, another fantastic installment - will we be getting any more? *hopeful face*

Great installment! I'm glad that Sakura was able to restore his hands.

I hope you won't wait too long to bring the next chapter detailing his recovery - and hopefully her revenge.

Wow, great chapter ...or um ...story. Why don't you combine all of these instead of making them all one-shots? either way, glad to see that you haven't left everyone hanging.