Okay, "D" made me cry again, but it was so sweet. Lyn having trouble reading, but she could read all five words just fine? Classic. As is Kent having trouble with words, but finally leaving her a note!

Thanks for the offering!

Trev

Again, amazing job with Kent and Lyn! Also, your portrayal of their rather taboo love is accurate as well. A knight romancing his princess would have certainly caused an uproar.

Keep up the wonderful writing!

Oh yes, I definitely agree. Oswin and Serra are really great together, and he's one of the very males who could tolerate her and her quirky ways. I will search for stories with them as the main pairing but will only get one-shots. Perhaps I need to look again...

But I digress--endearing chapter, Oswin's wavering decision of how Serra's voice affects was nicely done. The last line was hilarious--the perfect touch.

I'm a sucker for Jaffar/Nino and you did fine with his characterization, I have no compliants. Really.

Now, I love how you've written this, with the whole deceit thing going on. You've successfully portrayed Kent and Lyndis as lovers. I must commend you for how you've done Kent: you've written his love very realistically. He's a very awkward guy when it comes to women. Sain was also really good in this chapter. Didn't see too much of Lyn, but you've done her well too, I think.

Not to be a deadpan, but I'm pretty sure from Kent and Lyn's support ending that they leave Caelin with everyone's blessing. Of course, that would just kill the drama anyway.

If I may, I would request one thing for a future chapter. I'd like to see you do Eliwood/Fiora. It's not a very popular pairing, but I managed to complete their A Support today, and I'm interested in seeing another writer portray their relationship.

Hoping to see an update soon!

Serra and Oswin, now that is one interesting pair. I haven't got their support yet so on my current playthrough I'm pairing them together. That will be fun. I think I'll have a heightened expectation of the support conversations now that I've read this chapter.

Hahahha. They really don't get much love.

Wow, it's nice to see some decent FE7 fics. Keep it up! I really liked the Matthew chapter. Matthew's really cool.

haha! interesting.

hmm...actually people out at war aren't squeamish about killing. but well, to fit the context, yeah.

not a pairing, right> well, i don't think so, at least.
keep writing! me likes this!