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Crazy-Eyed Priestess
2009-12-12 . chapter 11
loved it.
Midnight's Queen
2009-12-12 . chapter 11
Really? "We will rock you"? Oh, wow... And then trying to incorporate "We are the champions" into the story as well? AND having a couple of mushy moments with Leanna saying nice stuff to Jareth? There is only one thing this could be called: funny as hell. Really, it brightened up MY day so far, and you know what's going on. *snickers* Can't wait for chapter 11... I can just see Jareth panicking and Leanna shouting obscenities.
Crazy-Eyed Priestess
2009-12-11 . chapter 10
again...love it, said it in an anonymous review, need to add to faves, dont know how to without reviewing...i love it!! write more! etc~!
hazlgrnLizzy
2009-10-07 . chapter 10
An enjoyable chapter!
Team Guy of Gisborne
2009-10-06 . chapter 10
That was a nice daddy/daoughter moment i wonder how she could not remember him? Loved it! update soon!
notwritten
2009-10-05 . chapter 10
That was interesting to read. Keep smiling. :-)
Kuroibara Kitty
2009-09-30 . chapter 9
This is great so far :) but hurry up and update! Pretty please! I'll give you cookies! Lol XD

Again, I'd just like to mention the proof-reading/beta thing, it would really improve the experience of reading your fics

Now I'm really in the mood to write... Lol

A random little bit of info for you, I've got my music on shuffle and 'Into The Labyrinth' came on just as I started writing this review XD

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Kuroibara Kitty
Kuroibara Kitty
2009-09-30 . chapter 6
O
I'm back XD

Is Miach going to be the ex-king? The one Wyndham locked up?

Must keep reading <3

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Kuroibara Kitty
Kuroibara Kitty
2009-09-29 . chapter 5
Damn right you're EVIL!

Toby! Sarah!! Wyndham is Moldyshorts! (I'm going to keep thinking of him as that now... lol)

I can't believe you were thinking of killing TOBY! I have to think of some form of torture for you >:| Hmm... Flamethrower? Too quick... Dig heart out with a spoon? I like that one... Might be too quick as well though... Slowly burn off limbs with acid? Now we're getting somewhere! We can add all three! Burn, put fire out with acid, dig heart out with spoon! Beware LP! Mwahahaha!

But... then again... you've said you're going to fix Toby's leg... *Dances around room* He's going to be okay XD Yay!
Maybe the torture thing isn't such a good idea... :/ I should probably keep reading, shouldn't I?

Must keep reading! But too tired! I think I'm over emotional because of fatigue! Blergh... *Starts snoring* *Dream-self slaps face* *Wakes up* Argh!

I have a feeling I'm going to go to bed now... (4:30am) Hope you enjoyed reading my extra-long over-emotional review XD

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Kuroibara Kitty
Kuroibara Kitty
2009-09-29 . chapter 1
Moldyshorts? What's he doing if this isn't a cross-over? :P

Must continue reading!

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Kuroibara Kitty
hazlgrnLizzy
2009-09-06 . chapter 9
An interesting chapter!
notwritten
2009-08-30 . chapter 9
Thank you for sharing this winsome reading. Keep smiling. :-)
Midnight's Queen
2009-08-30 . chapter 9
Hey, LP! Figured I would give this review just because. Jareth, Leanna doesn't hate you, you just annoy her. Anyway, LP, I found this chapter good but a bit confusing. Maybe I need to go back and read it again, I dunno. Anyway, BYE!

MQ
Team Guy of Gisborne
2009-08-30 . chapter 9
Wow big chapter! Love it! Poor Moth never got a name though lol jk. that poem was great did u write it? update soon!
hazlgrnLizzy
2009-08-18 . chapter 8
An enjoyable read!
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