huh when you said dark skin and dark eyes i was thinking storm but im glad it wasnt. i think that they are more like brother and sister than anything. its like storm is his sister, jean is the girl he always had a crush during high school but got over after his brother married her. but to me at least, rogue is the girl that has always been there for him and he finally realizes how much he loves her in college after she tries dating his little brother and he realizes that he really doesnt like it. lol. scott is his older brother. nightcrawler brother in law and bobby is his little brother. xavier is his father. magneto is hi evil uncle. and of course mystique is his uncles seductress wife. and pyro is their kid. lol im weird i know. sorry just had to get that out. just had a cup full of caffeinated hot chocolate. so im hyper

Aw, wow, that was amazing! Fantastic writing :D And I absolutly loved the ending, it put a smile on my face :D Great job!