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| clio21000 2005-08-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseHi, I enjoyed the story - I always am glad when Greg gets the girl! - but, as a WI native, felt obligated to point out an error in your linguistic analysis of "Jane's" speech. It's not just the rural WI ppl who say "bubbler" - we all do! And actually, the term originated in the Milwaukee area, so someone who says bubbler is almost more likely to be from an urban area than a rural one. Anyway, just wanted to correct that - otherwise, loved the story! |
| smithrageus 2004-08-18 ch 1,  | abusethat was odd but wonderful please continue. |
| leather leasure 2003-12-30 ch 1, | abusevery interesting i loved it the c/g is great |
| Christina 2003-04-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is good. Shame u didn't do more |
| samsea 2002-12-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseWhat a lovely story. I will be looking out for more......... |
| Anna 2002-09-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseI have to say I really liked the story a lot! It was really good! |
| Anna 2002-09-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseI have to say I really liked the story a lot! It was really good! |
| szhismine 2002-09-08 ch 1, anon. | abusegreat! is that the end or are you going to write more? |
| a reader 2002-08-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseomg, WONDERFUL!!! great writing, and i absolutley love greg....hes such a sweetie....keep up the good work and write some more! |
| Amadelia 2002-03-08 ch 1, | abusethis is so *so* good and is really touching. i love all of the descriptions involved, and i feel like i'm actually looking on. i can picture the characters, get to know them, and-well-it's so awesome! rarely do stories do that, and it was even a privelige to read yours. please work on it some more! |
| Erin Kaye Hashet 2002-01-30 ch 1, | abuseI've read some good CSI fanfic before, but this is the first GREAT CSI fanfic. They all talked like they really would on the show. Even the case sounded realistic. And a nice romance thrown in, too. A wonderful story. And I really hate to nitpick, since I did love this story, but I've lived in Massachusetts my whole life, and I say "bubbler"- or "bubbla." But that didn't spoil my enjoyment of the story! |
| Morrolan 2002-01-19 ch 1, | abuseYeah for Greg! Finnaly he gets to hook up with someone. This is a good story and I like it a lot. |
| Ellen Stone 2001-12-27 ch 1, anon. | abuseSouthern Mass and RI also call water fountains "bubblers" or more correctly, "bubblas". Good story. |
| Rio3 2001-12-26 ch 1, | abuseHey, this story was great! You did a great job capturing the character's personalities :) Good job! |
| silvergriffin06 2001-12-25 ch 1, | abuseTHAT WAS REALLY AWESOME!!! YOU SHOULD DEFINETLY CONTINUE IT!!! MAYBE SHE COULD DECIDE NOT TO GO BACK??? OR BECOME A CSI??? I DUNNO, JUST AN IDEA!!! THIS IS GREAT, SO YOU SHOULD CONTINUE IT!!! THANX!!! TATA |