I'm likeing this, I'm a sucker for a rachael/trent story, and I have a soft spot for the pairing. I think its great that your telling the story backwards (you used a name for it but i've forgoten it) and it adds some great effect to the story and it isnt something I see done often, so I like it. O0O0O0O I'm itching to find out what has happened, and I cant find a fault with your story, its very well writen so I have no critisisums, which is really good. looking forward to the next instalment, please update soon, great job so far :) x

This story is really good, the plots good. I think you showed how hollow rachel must then really well.

you got me hooked! :) cant wait for the next chapter.

You have captured the characters' actions and speech patterns, which is the hallmark of good fanfic. I'd like to see where you go with this, hope you continue.

I always thought that Trent had a thing for Rachel...because they always seem to play around with each other...even though things have gotten dangerously crazy at times... can't wait to see what happened...

I love this story and I cried during the funeral! I also love the part with Ivy and Trent.

can't wait for chapter 2 and 3 and 4 and how ever many you have ready for us. This plot has completely entrapped my imagination, I can't wait to see where you take it. New chapters soon pls? =)

I'm dying here!! Still looking for chapter 2!

whoa good for them both just wish they had time together love the pairing
maria

omgs I remember this story from forever ago! It was called One Red Rose then and was posted on a fanfic or hollows community. I loved it then and I still do; killing Rachel is okay with me as long as it gets us some yummy Trench action. So...if you're working on it again, does that mean that elusive third chapter will be coming out? I can't freaking wait! =D