 uchiha96 2009-06-29 . chapter 14Bravo. I'm clapping to this. It's not a crappy ending either. It's a perfect ending to a great story. Meg learned her leason and everything is good again. Some people will critise you and you might get a flame or two but remember ' screw what anyone thinks, If your proud of it then it's good. There's sure to be some people who like it.' I'm glad I convinced you to keep on writing and I hope that You write more stories as good as this one. Congrats on finally finishing your story. |
 uchiha96 2009-06-29 . chapter 13its short but i think meg learned her leson |
 uchiha96 2009-06-29 . chapter 12Alot of things have been going on but I'm finally back on. Great job. To think that Meg has gotten this far. Keep up the good work. I'm on to the next chapter. |
 loessar 2009-06-26 . chapter 13Peter is becoming a better father in this story. It reminds me of the earlier seasons when he was there for her. Keep it up. |
 jusAgurl93x 2009-06-25 . chapter 13Dude, I wish peter was my dad!
XD
giving her beers like its nothing.
and might i remind you.. where's STEWIE?! (and chris.. but more importantly STEWIE)
hah i think id be funny to hear what stewie would say about all this. This chap was funny. I liked it.
Guess I reviewed all the chaps.. UPDATE SOON! :)
(p.s, I think im gunna smoke some weed TONIGHT.
hah.. not like you care. you prob dont.) |
 jusAgurl93x 2009-06-25 . chapter 12WOW!
SHE WAS SLEEPING!
GIVE HER A ** BREAK!
so she touched her mom's boob on accident when she was sleeping.. so what?
Why are they makeing a big deal out of it?
Its not like she was away and clutched onto both her breasts like some perverted night person.
Their taking this way too serriously I think.
Hell, I sleep with my friends (girls.. i am a girl)
and i put my legs over them somtimes when their sleeping
or they do it to me.. So what?
your sleeping.
They should get over it. |
 jusAgurl93x 2009-06-25 . chapter 11funny.. they swiched spots.
meg's happy, and Peter's upset.
Ironic |
 jusAgurl93x 2009-06-25 . chapter 10good chap :) |
 jusAgurl93x 2009-06-25 . chapter 9lol is this turning into some kinda horror story or what
XD
hah, atleast you add twists. thats good. |
 jusAgurl93x 2009-06-25 . chapter 8oh.. and dude, who's lennie?
I think i read about her once before but
never really thought about it, but good chap :) |
 jusAgurl93x 2009-06-25 . chapter 7dude.. cant get that hooked.
I mean meth or heroine but come on!
lol but as I said, your story. |
 jusAgurl93x 2009-06-25 . chapter 6good chapter :)
Ive also noticed.. where the **'s Chris too?
and on the contrary..
You wouldnt be throwing your life away for doing a lot of weed.. acctually its the least most affective and addictive drug in the world. I dont even see it as a drug.. just a self meddicition sequence. and Meg needs help? im supprised,
In real life it would take a long ** time to get addicted to weed, im talkin years and years of it.
But hey, its family guy, your story, anything goes.
I'll read next chap. |
 jusAgurl93x 2009-06-25 . chapter 5THERES BRIAN!
XD
and munchies.. oh know the feeling.
Except I try to iggnore it.
My friends say they think everything tastes better
when your high.. i think the opposite, it taste weird,
gross almost. deff different. |
 jusAgurl93x 2009-06-25 . chapter 4aww sad. :(
btw, who the ** is this jack dude?
Is he like.. a friend of the family?
idk, guess i missed that part in the beggining. |
 jusAgurl93x 2009-06-25 . chapter 3wow, this is good so far.. I think I'll comment on each chap.
Hah, I get high a lot.. Lol i think im like meg.
lightweight.
Could get high off of 2 or 3 drags.
** awsome though.
Prob due to the fact Im 16 and still 5 ft.
lol, anyways.. I'll read on.
Wheres Brian and stewie in here yet?
She could have easily stole it from brian..
I would if that dude lived with me. |