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The Alternative Source
2010-01-03 . chapter 21
This was really sweet. And I completly agree with you. I think he would be different for her. Love changes you and any love that Mugen would get would change him for the better. lol. Great Job.
LadyNemoJ
2010-01-01 . chapter 21
I cant express how much I enjoy reading all of these stories, I think you are great. Please continue (selfish I know). I agree that Mugen is more than he appears and given the chance, he would have so much to offer - devotion, passion, kindness, deep thoughts, etc. I think you do a very good job of portraying that in different scenarios, but I really like that they are not all sunshine and rainbows. Mugen is dirty, vulger, violent and childish, (and sexy) but if someone (Fuu) knew all your dirty past and loved you anyway, that acceptence would be powerful enough to knock down some personal walls. I'm not saying he would turn into a fine upstanding citizen to everyone (or even most), I'm just saying he would have someone (Fuu) to show his all to without fear of judgement. And she would be a very lucky girl indeed (sigh).
Luv4Uncas
2009-12-30 . chapter 21
I am so glad that you created a chapter having to do with Mugen's guilt/shame over his past! I feel that in the anime they really touched on it with the misguided miscreants episode and the last couple of episodes and so having you put more of an emphasis on his shame really was rewarding! It was really well written! Thanks and I hope to read more from you soon!
bebelurvsbishiess
2009-12-30 . chapter 21
Wow, this one really made me cry. I think I'm about as emotional as fuu is haha. I love how you portray his feelings, and how she feels when she sees that he wants to be a better person. Also, that last line was beautiful (:
CherryBlossom006
2009-12-29 . chapter 21
Oh my god!
this was such a beautifull story!
i so loved the final phrase! so beautiful!!
and the fact she wants him to be a better man ^^
so cute! hehehehe
Madam Midnight
2009-12-28 . chapter 21
I really, really enjoyed this one!
outcast
2009-12-28 . chapter 21
i read your author's note and i totally agree with you.It's about damn time you updated! I thought you might have died or something...:P
demonwings737
2009-12-28 . chapter 21
I really liked this one. I'm not sure why but I love how their complicated relationship is really brought to light. It was so touching to see her crying for his sake than because of his past. Wonderful.

Update soon!
LadyNemoJ
2009-12-08 . chapter 20
I have read these stories over and over and love them every time! I am a huge fan of Fugen, so it is wonderful for someone to write about them. You are very good at this and I look forward to reading more. I have to admit I really like the collections of one shots as I can read while I am working and not get too caught up in a story. I have to say "Street Spirit" and "Ive been loving you too long" are my favs, but I like them all a lot. And keep ignoring the prudes out there, I love your smut! I will be making it a point to read more of your stories.
blue0range
2009-12-04 . chapter 20
ugh so good!
i really cant say anything else! nothing to fix, it was perfect!
Madam Midnight
2009-12-03 . chapter 20
This one was really good!
Luv4Uncas
2009-12-03 . chapter 20
Two months is a long time. I hope is does pass by fast! Update soon!
CherryBlossom006
2009-12-03 . chapter 20
oh i loved it!
i was longing to read another chapter of yours! ehehhehe
the end fits perfect with them both! kinky ;)
blue0range
2009-11-22 . chapter 19
very good! i like how much is being said in such a short amount of lines.

also update? soon? please?
dbzgtfan2004
2009-11-15 . chapter 1
This is a good story. Please continue. Mugen and Fuu forever.
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