What a wonderful story! Of course, it would have been even better if it had been 15 or so chapters but oh, well... ;P

I am in love with your writing. Please give us another story soon! You are a fantastic writer.

Oh man, this is just a gorgeous fic! I don't understand how you're so consistently great, but I am truly grateful for yet another wonderful chapter in the boys' lives as told by one of the best writers in the entire fandom.

This story in particular really pulls at my heartstrings - I am a total sucker for stories which show me just how much the boys love each other and understand one another. Like Sam was quickly able to tell the real Dean from the shapeshifter Dean in "Skin", I truly love how even when Sam is stripped almost entirely of his senses, he still finds his way to Dean. And better yet, he knows to trust Dean, and that's simply the product of the love and understanding that he's accumulated for his big brother over the years. And vice-versa - Dean just knows what to say to put his brother at ease. They simply know one another, completely.

Even when threatened with the utmost of grievances (I truly felt horrible for Sam having to go through those events with the mormo - ranging from those dogs biting him to that monster using Dean as bait, knowing full well that it would terrify Sam to his very core, and I have to admit, I was right there along with him) - Sam still manages to come through, and it's all due to the trust that he has for Dean. These brothers can withstand anything, and I ADORE how you write them. I truly feel like I'm reading about Sam and Dean here, the characterisation is just spot-on and it makes for a truly beautiful read.

Sigh. I love how much these brothers love one another. And I love your writing! DUDE, YOU'RE AWESOME. PLEASE CONTINUE WRITING FOREVER. Thank you and goodnight! :D

(btw, do you have any other sites that host your fanfic, like an LJ perhaps? I haven't missed any of your fics, have I? lol, the knowledge that there might be more of your fics out there that I haven't read scares me :P)

It made no difference that this was AU and would have loved this story to have been an epi! Could just imagine them making that curse box with their arms linked to keep Sam's contact and, therefore, his senses, and getting comments from those going to and from the bar. A stroke of luck they were at a bar and crates were abandoned outside! Loved how they finally got the mormo into the crate and decided to take it to their dad's lock-up, a place that has never been used to its full potential in the series. And typical Dean's comments about not being happy to have the crate containing the creature in the back of his 'baby'!
A really entertaining read, loved it.

For a while there I thought the mormo really had Dean and had taken him to hell before his time, what a relief it was Sam hallucinating, though it obviously wasn't fun for him! So the silver bullet didn't work so they have to revert to plan B, making a curse box big enough to house her! Thank goodness that Sam has the one from which held the rabbit's foot in his bag for reference! And just hope their mobiles have enough battery if Bobby has to help talk them through it!
Off to read chapter 3 now, what a treat not to have to wait!

Glad I found this fic as I love your work and have missed your stories.
Great start. Poor Sam thinking he's facing an empusa when it is in fact a mormo, something closely related to it. No wonder the insults didn't work and she bit him, but lucky that little bit of light was there for him to go towards. And how lucky he fell into Dean's lap, finding out keeping physical contact with his big brother could keep the spell from working.
Now they just have to keep together for Sam to keep his senses which could be interesting and awkward! And to top it off they need to ring Bobby for advice!
Off to read chapter 2 now!

best line "Did she just call us skanks?"

I like the combo of the two entities and the fact that together the boys could take her down. PLUS you used the storage shed, which is WAY underutilized, as far as I'm concerned, in the show.

Fun story!

Well, we know what happened (snifflesob) but this was still great!

Good job!

Wow. So good!

Man that's dead awesome!! Would make one hell of an episode!! Great idea and really well written! Describes so well I can imagine it happen in my head <3

I really loved this chapter. To see Sam so determined to save Dean, that even the mention of it not happening makes him mad enough to overcome the mormo was pretty awesome. Yeah, we know it didn't happen but we also know how determined Sam was and how much more devastating that made Dean going to hell for him. I really liked what you did with this story. Hugs, Vonnie

Very nicely done! It doesn't matter to me if it's AU. At the time Sam really thought he would save Dean. As with all of your stories, the brotherly relationship was wonderful. And I love Dean and Sam each giving in to each other's ideas. They work together so well as a team! Thanks for a lovely treat for my lunch break today! :-)

Kara

Yeah...but it's in the car, Sam.

That was delightful - good spooky stuffy and very funny. Thanks!

Phoebe

Loved Dean batting his eyes at Sam - hysterical.

Phoebe

Love the set up - and the situation. Thanks for making Dean smart too. Love that!

Phoebe