Eh... It wasn't as good as "Ice and Anybodys." I still liked it, but not as much. One thing that bugged me throughout this story is that you spelled "Voila", meaning "there it is", pretty much, "Viola", which is a string instrument. There's a big difference...

Aw, 'nother happy ending. Yay! I always liked Baby John, but didn't think he belonged in the gang. Good going on another good story.

THAT it
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Yay
and
*with attudie*"its about time girl "
I lOVE THIS STORY
so intese
i wonder what happens next
(can ya spoil me i made a acctout
Jazminthegreat)
Ps Ya rock

Plz update im desprate 'im borde

OMG
thats deep
i hope azzura is proven innconte
ps i need to know is the Ending of ice&anybodys gonna be put in here too
pps Keep Up the Good Work
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i thougth they were gonna do it do it do it aal night

Good so far - although things feel a bit rushed. thrash things out more - describe things, and slow the action down a bit. make your chapters lnoger, too. Give more depth into the characters - Ice is now dating Anybodys - when did this happen? Describe it to us - it'll add dpeth to your story and make what is interesting now a very irresistable story. Plus, adding author's ntoes in the middle of stories is very distracting.

Update!
im rading juss aint
got much time to reviwe

Poor Baby John. On the bright side, he got a kiss! Please update soon!

I like it. Baby John is one of my favorite characters.(Him and A-rab.) Not very many storys that have a lot of him in them. Please update soon.

THis is F*%@!^! Awsome