Gosh this chapter was good. I love your writing style and this naughty tension between Jackson Lisa is heavenly. I'm loving this!)

Wow this story is great! This chapter made me feel like this could be Red Eye Part II. I'm hooked!)

Well, it's about time! Actually, this was a great chapter and the next chapter will finally wrap this story up, right? Because I just don't think I can stand the suspense much longer!

Ah! You're back!

I can't wait to see what happens.

Thank you so much for the update.

Glad you updated, this is a brilliant chapter, and cannot wait for the next. Please update soon! :D

Just read this fic... so scary.. and exciting. I reviewed . You update.)

Holly shit! Its breath update here in suspense.

Read this story straight through and LOVE. just plain love. there are only a few things that don't quite fit...

For example: You really didn't explain as to why Jackson no longer feels like destroying Lisa. Nothing happened between them to spark any change in behavior. It's understandable that he would be possesive and want to hurt her himself, but he seemed to feel more guilty and less likely to ever hurt her for no reason.
And now away from the negative and onto the positive!
I love Adam and Greg. I sort of wanted to hug Greg when he was beating himself up about Lisa's kidnapping. And Adam is the perfect computer nerd. it's like you wrapped up stereotypes and put a 'bad-ass' bow on it and named it Adam. Also, good job on Jackson. You didn't make him invisible or too cool, you gave him weak points while still keeping him the 'legendary Rippner.' Lisa getting raped by Riley was a nasty but well written plot event. it made me all angry and pouty.
Australia? Love, even if they didn't do much but almost die there.
Overall... UPDATE SOON I NEED TO FIND OUT HOW IT ENDS. ahem. yes, um, take your time.

amazing action packed writing! i love your story always makes my day reading it! please please please update soon)

What Is Happened To Lisa

I really liked this chapter. I can't wait to see what happens with Jackson and Lisa.

I am absolutely loving this story. Riley is a most disgusting bastard. Keep on writing! :D

THANKS for the update! You write so well.

I feel so bad for Lisa
But I hope that everything goes alright with her, Adam, and Jackson. So much suspense in this chapter! I loved it!

OOHHHH pllzzz update soonn..!.. this story is sooo addictiv!

OMG OMG OMG OMG! AN UPPDDAAATTTEEEEEEEEEEEEE!

God I miss this story sooooooooooo much! And I LOVED this chapter! Adam is awesome and very likeable! You've created such a great character! Unlike most other created characters in fanfics where they annoy you to know end!

As for Jackson, WHERE ARE YOU? Lisa needs you QUICK!