GOod story!

It's so... horrible. And wonderful. But mainly horrible. And then wonderful, again, too.

This was excellent - very sad, though. I liked the places they fit in, respectively, and the chair open for Sirius. Excellent job.

I reviewed this in the Ficathon fic, but I loved this so much that I'm going to review it again... I love the idea of having Sirius be 'golden' and Marlene be the one who is damaged beyond repair... just BEAUTIFUL... really.

Beautifully written, as always. XD I love the meaphor with the broken glass and everything, and the lack of dialogue--mostly--fit the piece well. I love your Marlene. (:

I really enjoyed this. I found that the writing flowed consistently, with no awkward sentences or phrases. It was darkly beautiful, and reminded me of poetry.

This is really beautiful - the minimal dialogue and detailed description was perfect for the emotions of this story. Your portrayal of Marlene and Sirius was also beautiful, tragic even. I love it.