Ok, I really enjoyed your story. Well written. Excellent characterization. And definately deserving of more than just on review - hence the slightly silly reviews for the individual chapters.

Good job and thank you for your story, Sleepy Lotus

Good ending

Hooray! Well written. Still got the characters pegged.

smart boy

smart girl

good sexual tension

Enter Sethos. hm

very nice picture of Ramses that you sketch

This is so like Nefret. Passionate, curious, willful

You've got the characters spot on

ooh, I liked this

hmm good beginning

Wow! That was a great idea...Sethos had two daughters, so why not a son who'd inherited his love for tomb robbing?!

I really enjoyed reading this story, I thought they were all very much in character. Loved Ramses' jealousy as well and of course, his daring rescue of Nefret.

Hope you'll write another Amelia Peabody story...I will definitely read and review, if so!