Amazing story! :-D Mawari is one of my favorite characters on the show and it's nice to read an awesome one-shot about her.

If you're up to it, would there possibly be plans for a Mawari x Kai one-shot? Ever since the episode "What's Your Name?" with the boat scene I've found myself liking that couple. (If you've seen the OVA with the introduction to Saturn, Mawari was one of the first to search for him. And she followed Kai for quite a bit in episode 24 "Farewell Friend".)

In any case, very nice story!

I just love this story .

I always thought that she deserved him a but more than San considering she knew him since childhood. I too think it's very sad how little fanfics there are for this anime :(

Anyway great story, keep it up! :D

You say you want reviews, eh?

Well.

IT'S THERE, NOT THEIR!

I forgive you, since you obviously tried hard and this is the SNH fandom.

/shot

Here's an idea.. I would love to see some Mawari Kai stuff.

What got me hooked on this pairing is the Double date ep.

The one where they got in a boat Kai accidently landed on top of her.

Yeah I know Kai loves Sun and Mawari loves Nagasumi. But I can see them starting off as friends then working thier way up.

Both of them have a military like behavor.

They always end up on the White team.

Wow this was great! I really hope you either continue this story or do another with this pairing it's honestly one of the best one shots on this site

really good story, keep up the great work.

Im not the type to say things a lot, but let me tell ya.

AWESOME. VERY. VERY. AWESOME.