I don't know how to convey begging in a textual review, but I'm sure the hell gonna try.
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE continue this story! It's coming a bit late, I know, but this pairing is pure genius and you're a fantastic writer.
Plus, I adore Niko. ^-^
Great piece of writing. I've favorited it.

ok this is good you have to continue it, they have to end up together. i love the character nikola and he needs her. more more more please write more.

Very interesting take on the dynamic. I like it. You've got a wonderful grasp of his tortured POV. :-D Great job!

I'm sorry to see you didn't continue this, it's really good.

Oh PLEASE continue! I love the Helen/Nikola pairing... it's so tough to find good fics!

Awesome job! :3

Such a well done snapshot!
I really like this, hopefully you'll continue it, your writing is seamless, and doesn't distract from your story at all.

Second chapter please!

great story you should continue

Two words: LOVE IT! I'm all for the Helen / Nikola pairig and would *absolutly* love to read another of your fics. You capture both of them beautifully. And after all, Nikola is everyone's favorite vampire. (Well actually, mine is Spike from BtVS, but Nikola gets a spot right next to him.) I WANT MORE! :D
Hope I've convinced ya! I'll keep watching!
Ta,
Alley

I'm usually a fan of Helen/John, but I actually really liked this. You did a good job with the angst- it was really well done. The BEST Nikola story I have ever read! =]
<3 Nikola.

You really really should continue, if you're still considering it. I would definately read it.

Aie!

Write more!!
I love Nikola and this fic almost made me cry, Helen (in the series and here in this fic) realy, has begun to get on my nerves.
Yes yesyes.
LOVE NIKOLA
WRITE MORE
...
PLEASE
=D
<3

YES!THE HAIR!THANK YOU!Your writing is awesome.Please continue this:-D

So I'm reviewing and adding it to my favorite list. Which means I WANT MORE! Oh and this is brilliant by the way! Poor Nikola and poor Helen. The way you write is so easy to read, it just flows so well. Can't wait to read more! (hint hint)

THAT WAS GOOD, YOU SHOULD HAVE SOME THING BIG HAPPEN LIKE NIKOLA HERD HER.

OMG! That was amaze! You have to continue it, you're such a great writer and I think it's amazing what you've done so far. I will keep my eyes open for any updates. One hint though, falling, falling, falling, ran, ran, ran. It's ok once but only twice if teh first 3 are right at the start of the story. How about:
She ran. She ran until all her breath was spent etc and keep falling, falling, falling. But hey I'm just an amature, what do I know?

Please continue it though, it was great!

you really need to continue this i usualy am a silent reader but please update this

helen and nikola make a hot couple

please update

=D