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Alug-Andaaz-Hai
2009-10-14 . chapter 11
I'm so glad Peter came to the rescue! But of course, now I'm on the edge of my seat wondering what will happen next! Where will Peter and Manu go? What will Sylar do once he wakes?

I still feel a sad pang like I always do when there's Mohinder death but it's not even that bad since Manu's around. He's so lovable!

Can't wait for more! :D
Xhoxho/Kisa9
2009-10-13 . chapter 11
Yay! I'm glad Peter came to the rescue! Sure, Gabriel should have some kind of parental rights, but really, he was really freakin them up. I hope that Peter is able to provide a better guardianship for Manu.
Anon
2009-09-24 . chapter 10
MOAR!

Pretty please?
Alug-Andaaz-Hai
2009-08-26 . chapter 10
I'm enjoying this story very much and I'm eager to find out what happens next! You did a great job with your OC, I'm loving him more and more with each chapter. Your Sylar voice is also very well done, in my opinion. :D

I like that the hints at mpreg are quite subtle and I can allow myself to believe it because, well, Mohinder's mutation was pretty freaky--who knows what he could have done to himself. Also, Mohinder is my most beloved character, so it's quite amazing that I'm enjoying a story where he's dead!

Can't wait for more!
Hazgarn
2009-08-22 . chapter 10
Oh, god, -the- apartment? Creepy...
Hazgarn
2009-08-14 . chapter 9
Peter is going to need a lot more coffee. Or maybe liquor. Or bleach...
Charismata
2009-08-02 . chapter 8
I love this fic. And this chapter made me so happy. Manu is an amazing original character. I loved the Sylar from "I am Become Death". Hopefully Manu will bring that out of him. You are an awesome writer and you should defiantly write more. I can't wait for Sylar reaction when he finds out that Manu is his.
Keep it coming!
korax
2009-07-29 . chapter 7
Argh! You have me hooked and checking this story for updates every day! Writer faster! I want to know more!
Thildou
2009-07-14 . chapter 6
Hi !
First, I'm French, I'm thirteen so my english is'nt good...
But I read your fanfiction and I liked it !
I can't understand all that you wrote but I liked all the same.
I do not have much of the other one to say xD Ah, if, I am sorry if I skinned your language.
Hazgarn
2009-07-11 . chapter 6
I originally passed this up, though I can't remember why. Probably I saw the "Mpreg" warning in the beginning when I first looked at it. I missed when I checked out the story this time, and forgot, but oh well...

This is definitely interesting.

Usually I don't go for the whole mpreg thing, since it often seems to occur in some way that just seems silly to me. In this case, though, I'm willing to suspend disbelief simply because it's Mohinder... After the whole lizard-bug-mutant thing and his miraculous and inadequately explained "cure" lord knows what all -else- his weird experiment might have done to him.

Also willing to look past that bit of weirdness simply because the idea of Sylar trying to raise Mohinder's son as his own is just too good to pass up. Will hope for an update soon.
unknown
2009-07-11 . chapter 6
I really, really love this story... Can't wait for the next chapter!
thedoctor999L
2009-07-09 . chapter 1
Interesting- Sylar's reaction to Mohinder's death. :) I like it!
Priestess Catatonia
2009-07-09 . chapter 5
Never ever thought of this pairing. Very interesting. I like it!
chrystal
2009-06-16 . chapter 3
oh my god. u really are joking me. seriously. update another please
nelly
2009-06-09 . chapter 1
interesting begining, chap 2 is way better, write more soon
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