Hmm.. Mombi Huh? She was never that particularly powerful a character in any of the Oz incarnations whether books, movies, or even comic books but the nomes were indeed something to be feared so I hope to see more of this...

Well, two issues. One is strictly a grammar one. "site Forman" should be spelled "Site foreman" if you're talking about the position, unless the man's name was "Forman."

Second: Jeb didn't do a damn thing and he's armed? Doesn't ring true.

Hmm...this looks interesting. Would you like a beta? I just noted some grammatical things here and there. Otherwise, looks great, can't wait for more. Mombi was always my favorite after the Wicked Witch.

Farrah K