Yet another intriguing chapter! What's Ra gonna do! The meanie! I LOVE IT!

Oh oh! I'm intrigued! I just love it when the boys get into trouble!

Nice wrap-up. Thanks. I really enjoyed the story. You spin a great adventure tale!

Great story, doubt either of them want to walk by a river in the near future as for the grated onions loved it. Looking forward to the sequel thanks for sharing.

Liked the ending, and the entire story! :D Hopin' for that sequel, though! ;) :D :D :D

Haha, love the onion thing. Is that something you've actually heard of being done, or did you just completely make that up? Anyway, good story, and I look forward to more from you.

I did enjoy it. Very much. Thank you.

Great ending!! Thanks for sharing!

Oh, did I read 'sequel'? :D

zeilfanaat

Congrats on ANOTHER brilliant fic. It has an entirely plausible plot, Jack whump and humour - it really felt like it could have been an episode. I really enjoyed this and hope you get round to writing another story like this or that sequel you mentioned.

Hawkeye

Nice return to the SGC! I particularly liked the scene where they came through the Gate. Thanks for updating so quickly, as usual!

Can't wait to read it. Good story.

Aw. The teams have definitely had a rough time, but they're all luckily in the safe and capable hands of Fraiser and the other SGC docs. :) And they've got Sam and Teal'c lookin' after 'em. :)

Great chapter.
Sounds like Jack has a way to go yet before he's back to full health.
Glad Daniel and Ferretti will be ok. :)

Oh no, only one chapter left? I was so enjoying it.
Oh well, am still looking forward to the next chapter, even if it is the last.

zeilfanaat

yes please, another chapter tonight - sitting - waiting - hoping - loved the story. Sitting - waiting -

Hearty1

Phew!! Almost there.