Hell yeah, you tell 'em! :p I dunno what the point of this little review is, except that I used to read this Everworld slash a long long time ago. Do you write any Everworld stuff anymore? It'd kick ass if you did! Haha, don't mind my rambling, just stopping by to remember the good ole slashy days of Everworld!-Onigokko

First off, on a happy note, I love this fic. Seriously. Snow is made to be glomped in. And kissed in, but whatever. Never stop writing- go EW slash!
Secondly...to Any And All Flamers: I have knives. I have guns. I have allies. You'd better lock your windows and doors at night, because I shall HUNT YOU DOWN.

Ahem...moving on...Continue! You left us hanging...I especially want to see Jalil's reaction to this.

I agree with the boys.. only ONE kiss! good Warm and fuzzyies!

Cute story. That sucks about the flames though. This isn't even something that they should be reviewing that way anyway. It was written pretty well, in my opinion. Keep it up _

hey your wrighting! (please)Christopher and David are my fav EW sweet!

Duck-K rules! Bring on the good C/D slash! By the way, I love Blushing!David; so cute, I just wanna gobble him up :P

R.L: Myuh. Stupid flamers... *grumbles* Get rid of Slash! HA!
Aero: Love this story. 9 We wish for it to be continued.
R.L*still grumbling* If that ever happens I will not be a verra happy person. *pulls out scythe* There will be hell to pay.
Aero: o.O You stole Duo's scythe again

I don't know why I even read the flame page... IF THAT HOMOPHOBIC ASSMUNCH EVEN THINK'S OF EMAILING TO GET RID OF SLASH I WILL PERSONALLY KILL THEM! If that happened I would have no valid reason to live! no! PLEASE! Don't ban slash from the only website I can find relief from my Yaoi-less life! ... Oh, yeah, the story... I love it and I BEG you to continue! Don't listen to those buttholes who have nothing better to do then succumb to their prejudice disires and poke fun at you. If they feel they have to keep bugging you I can teach you how to kill them in the slowest and most gruesomely painful way possible and make it look like an accident. -_-Ran Ishikawa
Ps: You've been added to my favorite authors and stories! Feel honored!

hurry up and update

The fact that before this review, there were 69 really amuses me.

Anyway! Really good; it's pointless fluff, but who cares? People need fluff. I, especially, need ChristopherDavid fluff. Mainly because those two are so cute together. _
Great story. Loved the ending.

Aw... I love this stuff. Those two are so cute...

P.S. You now, this is the THIRD time I've read a chapter dedicated to a flame, and TWO of these chapters are SLASH! On the other one, the story was really good, but the person STOPPED it because of all the flames! I mean, I actually compiled a list of offenses on one of them! A few of these were The story is clearly marked as containing gayness. This means thatyou
are probably either blind or you don't read the summaries. Your own fault for the reading, You went ALL THE WAY TO CHAPTER 3. That means that you DELIBERATELY went into that story, JUST to tell her what you thought. Ew and Honey, you're forcing your opinions on people. Rascists force their opinions on people. Sexists force their
opinions on people. You're no better. Am I the only one who has noticed an upsurge in flames, or is it nothing special?

P.P.S. C/D SLASH RULES!

Well, you know, even though you've made April and Jalil (my personal favorite characters, aside from Hel) sound somewhat stupid, I still like this fic. Yeah, it's plotless, pointless fluff, but we all need that sometimes, don't we? Aren't flamers just the most irritating people ever invented? They always make me laugh when they flame my fics because most of the time they don't say anything coherent and their grammer is worse than mine. Anyway, now that I've gotten completely off-track, let me say what I came to say: This is great. Wonderful Chris/Dave fluff. I would adore another chapter, if you wouldn't mind.

crack, cheap crack, these people are on crack. I LOVE YOUR STORIES! and obviously they cannot see real talent considering their probably just on crack, cheap crack. Or, they just cannot seem to penetrate the abundant, gelatinlike, blockheaded, coalgulated mass of idiocy and lack of their own talent. All i have to say to these feebleminded fools is that maybe they should actually go to SCHOOL before attempting to create a DECENT (accent on decent) review on a story, you never know, maybe you might get a FRIEND, oh, imagine that! p.s. love yer stories! pleease right more, oh and by the way, what's so bad about gay people? scared they'll touch you? there isn't much chance of that, they might catch rabies from you.

Well... Ignore the flames... and kill April..

I think you are a perfectly find writer *glares at the flamers* Not to mention, the excessive use of the word 'shit,' is a bit more offensive to the English language then the wonderful world that is slash... *mutters* stupid HoBiChos...

keep writing please..I'm too lazy to finish my own...

M-chan

Wow ok I never thought David would do that but hey wierd things happen all the time! anyways I like it! hehe thats all for now