I really loved this story, please think about writing a sequel

Brains running loose-- such a dangerous thing! *bows* And I don't think it'd weird that you show respect everywhere. :D I saw this story before, and I'd always wanted to see how you turned it out. Coming back here (the VK fandom) after some time and seeing this come to where it is, I must say that I didn't expect it to be this... tasty. Yes, that's the word. Though I notice the 'complete' tag, is it foolishness to hope for more chapters? Yes, irrationality. I know. :D Brilliant style, by the way. The characters are wellrounded-- and I'm falling in love with Pureblood!Zero all over again because of you. :D

so kaname finally started thinking of zero THAT WAY. and what is up with zero's heritage?

Excellent reversal of roles. Exception writing. Love the cuteness of Kaname. (totally 180 from his normal personality)

This is marked as complete? I sthis really the ending?

~eternalsnowforever

please update soon! the story is getting really interesting and i want to know what would happen next !

aw poor kaname and zero! huh, what's wrong with zero? please update soon!

An update at last, Lea! And sorry for reviewing late...

Oh, I bet I know what Kaname's 'nightmare' was about! *cackles in not-so-innocent glee* Poor thing though, to be blackmailed like that... *glares at an oblivious Yuuki*

But oh dear, there are some very worrying undertones in your fic, Lea! What's this with Zero having some sort of mysterious illness? Stubborn pureblood indeed but surely it can't be something so drastic as to mean 'Kaname's life' or 'Zero's life' right? Right? *looks around and wants to throttle someone until she gets some answers*

And look, here's dear sweet Kaname offering himself to Zero! Say he'll take it! And that it will benefit them both... I can't bear this to have a sad ending... *sniffles*

ROFL! Aw Kaname, doing such things with thoughts of Zero! What a naughty little boy you are! So I guess that Zero is still dying then? How are you going to explain that one I wonder?
And as for these two...they REALLY need to kiss soon, don't they? *sweat-drop*

lol, nice story, I was wondering , did Shizuka kill Yuuki's family like she killed Zero's?

So...in regards to my stupidity on my review on the last chapter. I now get it that it is like a yaoi fanfic (at least that's what you put down on the info for the fic) Anyway, you're converting me into a Zeki fan, this isn't good. Really. I also love Yuuki's departure from her usual weak girl stance, it's so great to see her capable and stuff like that XD Please keep on updating!

Lol, I love this story, but I have a question, am I right in guessing this is ending up to be a ZeroxKaname fic?

Love it! Really like this role reversal. I love the kind and caring Zero, shy Kaname, and kind hunter Yuuki. I could feel Zero really loves Kaname, and Kaname loves Zero. Poor Kaname and Zero, Zero cannot bit him. Wonder why Kaname was turned to human? Will Zero turn him back? Will they ever be together and be happy? Really looking forward for your next chapter.

I just have to review now. :3

Bwahahaha. Poor Kaname. Of course I know what Kaname is so mortified about! And what with this line "All he’d wanted, since he could remember, was his love, his care, and his attention. None of that was supposed to change; to advance to something else Kaname was much too embarrassed to name, even in his mind."

I just love how different Yuuki and Kaname's relationship is different from Zero and Yuuki's in canon. With Yuuki's kinder, more open disposition, you've really changed the story a whole lot and Zero seems a lot less manipulating than Kaname was in canon.

Poor Zero, and Kaname. All Zero would have to do to have Kaname stay by his side forever would be to bite him and to have the sentiment come right from Kaname, temptation indeed. And with a capital "T". Temptation. But poor Kaname because he doesn't know what he just said.

I was just thinking about this story and how I had to review and tell you that I wanted the scene where Zero bites Kaname, turns him back into a pureblood and what Yuuki's reaction was. But the way things are going, I'm not sure that's going to happen.

Can't wait to read more if you're going to write more!

Amorpheous

Wow, I thought this was only going to be a two-shot. I had been thinking about this particular fic recently and was mourning its shortness.
It's a brilliant idea, reversing all the roles. And you also managed to keep the characters close to their orginal personalities. That's very well done.
So who has the gun now? Is Yuuki's Artemis a gun or staff? And why if Kaname was a vampire before does Zero want him to live out as a human?
But keep going with this. The angst is a little bit murky but every other emotion is written well. Good Luck.

Erm... don't tell me Kaname having wet dreams?!

somehow... I've been wondering... who's the seme here... Zero seems more like it up till now...

Poor Zero, but it can't be helped since he wish to protect Kaname so much and hope for Kaname's happiness... the same go for Kaname...